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OOH brill fic hun

love how ya got Dean's snarkiness and humour dead on,- really clever ways too x

nice background on myth, and nicely written

:D

ahha loved rick and chuck kripke

haha x

LOL

great work hunx

LOVED THIS STORY! Great with the “Just fan-friggin’-tastic. I’ll never look at a pile of rocks the same way.”

haha Your really good at the boys characteristics (sp? i would check it but im lazy)

LOVE YA's -Manda

nice story, nice touch with the Kripke reference!