 127Suzanne 2009-10-26 . chapter 1i love it this is like one of my favourite one shot. thanks. |
 tuNGaw-GiRL 2009-10-19 . chapter 1wow! i like it so much...sorry i can't give much constructive comments...my brain is slightly malfunctioning...^_^ just kidding. good work!^_^ |
 Lady-of-Defiance 2009-09-04 . chapter 1i like this, it was really cute ^-^ |
 secondaryonly 2009-08-24 . chapter 1hahahaha
i like how you use practice for this. |
 StarEmbraced 2009-07-19 . chapter 1Wow, I loved this one too. You had a very realistic/believable portrayal of aged-up Ryoma and Sakuno. Sakuno especially was more confident with herself, but she still retained enough of her characteristic kindness and personality. I also enjoyed their casual interactions as well; everything felt natural and flowed smoothly, and there was no painful awkwardness that undermines any attempt at romance XD.
I know you probably would like a more in-depth review with more constructive criticism instead of an endless stream of praise, but I really couldn't find anything significant to comment on! The writing flowed wonderfully, your characters and narration had personality, etc... If there was something that nagged me, I had forgotten it by the end, haha.
Great job on all your stories! You're a wonderful author. I hope to see more of your writings in the future :) |
 staggered incite 2009-07-09 . chapter 1so good! thanks for the read. |
 SasoLOVE111 2009-06-25 . chapter 1"i like practice" hahah
that's funny
this was a really cute one-shot, yeah
you did an awesome job! |
 Kiki Koala 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Okay, I must have read all of your stories about a hundred times! I absolutely love them! And it's so nice to know that there are still people who support RyoxSaku.
Plus I just love anybody who uses the word "foible".
KIKIKOALA |
 Syaoran-Lover 2009-05-27 . chapter 1OMG SO CUTE! This was so cute!
I loved the initial scene! The checks were very funny.
And then the practice... LOL
Very nice idea, very neatly written (I can't believe the person who wrote this oneshot - which IS very nicely written! - is the same one from your earlier oneshots! the difference is huge and it's so nice to see them! :D)
thank you fro this lovely piece! ^^ |
 Carlalalita 2009-05-03 . chapter 1That was a really good peak into Ryoma & Sakuno's reintroduction. I really liked the way you created their memories.
Well done!
Cheers! |
 sweetswirlypop 2009-04-22 . chapter 1They're adorably romantic! Love the fluff. |
 Ichigo Aisukuri-mu 2009-03-05 . chapter 1heheh this story was so cute! they suit each other so much better when they're older! or maybe thats just ur awsumness?! lmao! :] |
 Aura Jade 2009-02-28 . chapter 1so cute. I love the way you write about Ryoma and Sakuno. Their relationship flows well. It doesn't seem forced upon us like some other stories do. |
 chibivy 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Wow. This is so cute! The story is well-written, and I like your writing style. I've never imagined that Ryoma and Sakuno's married life could be this amusing.
Please, please, please. Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapters! ^__^
~ioLanthe |
 sakuraheartz 2009-01-18 . chapter 1kya~~that was sweet hehe..
love it!!
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