Damn this has put tears in my eyes, well this and the prequel XD

Nice writing, you really know how to get the emotions going!

well indd its cute. but Tari just left her kids? not being mean but i think its kinda selfish of her.
but on the other hand she deserves to have happiness.
wha complicated.
anyway cute ending, great Job Smif

aww poor Jeane. yeah indd he loves ya

to emotional. but cool

aww poor Tari

You know how many times I've cried reading this?
I love it! Love it, love it, love it!
But you had to kill Tari as well at such a young age, right? *laughs*

EXCELLENT!

That is such a happy ending. I nearly cried, but it is a good ending. I would never be able to make it sound so real. Having Tari reunited with her loved ones.

CaptainKai01869

This is a good chapter. It wasn't as good as the others, but I still can't wait for the next one.

CaptainKai01869

This story is so emotional. Please keep it going. I am interested to find out what happens with Tari and her children.

Vegeta01869

so emotional! i love it! you can really feel Tari's pain/saddness/happiness/everything! your a very good writer to be able to put that accross! I can't wait for Jean's memories!

wow updated in 3 days congrats! lol!

thats so sad :( but it was really good describing the kids and what happened and stuff! can't wait for more!

I feel special, getting mentioned! lol

Hey, Loving the sequels first chapter. Its pretty heavy on the emotions. Great read cant wait for the almighty Chapter 2.