omg omg omg omg! i love it finally a story that makes sense!

i love last part is " “Well that was pretty ** up” one of the villagers muttered." Damn ... no wonder sakura

I just read the first chapter in the only thing that ran through my head was SHANNARO! BELIEVE IT. A great idea. I don't have enought thumbs to show them up so ig give you both of mine (double thumbs up).

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...THAT MUST BE SO **UN' AROUSING...IM FEELING HORNY NOW...WHOO(PLZ DONT TELL...)

Although it does take a new angle, this chapter would have been better if you USED PROPER GRAMMAR. I felt myself lost sometimes because some things were mispelled, or missed used. "he punch him, he punch her" is not proper,and not the right way to say it.

This story is gold. Realy enjoying it. Looking forward to the next part

ok cool story i enjoyed this chappie especially (hehehe)
in the next part i hope that it gets a little kinkier!
maybe with some anal and naruto punishing sakura for something by putting her over his knee and spanking her to **? ok hurry up with the nexp part! peace!

...whoa...That was funny can't wait to read

~Lilly~

uh oh!

wow!

Wow!

now that's really messed up

that's pretty messed up?!?!?!? first their beating the hell out of each other then this?

Please, please continue with this story. I want to read more. I like this story it is very funny, entertaining and very well put together in my opinion. So please write more of this story. I want to finish it. XD

Thanx, Akuma

(blushing)... I really, really enjoyed this chappie...it was really nice! I cant wait for the next one...
You did a great job at writing it...you know what I mean... xD

cya soon

xooxox