I think you have another perverted fan... -_-

*wipes blood from nose.

XD

Hahahah Red and Green make ZoLu, I like the way you put that in there.

I read it and I loved it 3! This was awesomely written, and I couldn't help but send it to my also perverted friend! X3 Thank you for writing it!

Love Phantom

its great to see a guy write yaoi and with a lemon too the story was great i would like to see more of your work

Very cute story. I loved it.

loved the ending convo

lolz

yes you are a good boy, but I find it kind of weird I mean a boy writing a YAOI lemon? still it was good.

DAMN SEXY!

you'rew lucky that i think you're a good boy, but if i had a brain i would say YOU'RE PRETTY BAD ASS!

Hahaha! Oh my god, that was great! Totally oved it! Awesome work! :)

KYA! *YAOI FANGIRL SQUEEL* LOVED IT! I DIDN'T THINK IT SUCKED AT ALL! XD I REALLY LIKED THE IDEA OF THEM HAVING SEX WHILE ROLLING AROUND IN PAINT! KYA! XD

lol loved it :D

XD loved it

xD awesome!

You are a good boy! It takes alot of courage to write a story this yaoish and fantastically brilliant! I commend you! The SanUso caught me through a loop though, but I liked it. Two thumbs way up! I wish I had that kind of courage to write one, but alas I am a...wimp. Great story! Kanpai!