|Reviews for Cherry Lips|
| Rocketship Romance 4/3/10 . chapter 1
You has achieved greatness and I haven't even began reading this yet. I read the... 'intro' thingy.. OKAY RIGHT NOW I DON'T REMEMBER WHAT ITS CALLED. BUT W/E. .. DESCRIPTION? OH! Well you know what I'm talking about... anyways... I LAUGHED after reading it.. so yes. .laughter. I now plan on actually reading it ;D
| blood as soft as silk 10/8/09 . chapter 1
Lol Loved it! xD This was an awesome story, and fun to read! Thanks!
| terra hotaru 10/4/09 . chapter 1
Had to log out to review. And I have to say that I love this fic all over again. Okay, I'm weird, I know. xD this is my third time reviewing this fic, but I'm a happy little girl. x3 reading this again and again and again never got me bored. I'm extremely excited. The kiss, the lies, and just... the everything. The dialogues. Everything fits perfectly well together. This fic is simply flawless in all sorts of ways. And lookie there! It's almost a year since this fic is posted and it's already more than a year since we come to know one another. 83 a lot have happened! But my opinion and feelings for this fic remains the same. It's just so good.
I love your writing style even more. x3 gogo, Am! I can't wait till you post another fic again! x3 I'm still waiting for the one you showed me. I'm sure it would be awesome. x3
You always got me into this really good feeling. Everytime I Read your fic. I am always brimming with happiness and awe.
Happiness because of the fluff.
Awe because of the perfectness of your writing. Your writing style is absolutely amazing.
And yes, I'm going to shower you with a lot of praises. xD so, feel free to have your ego way up high! like higher than the moon or so! Infinity sounds awesome.
It's just so perfect. I think I remember tearing up a little a year ago when I received this fic in my inbox. x3
Gah. I want more Axel Roxas smut from you! and from you only! because you're just so good!
Well, even if it's not smut, it's awesome! just in this one! kissing and touching and sweating. x3 it's already super fun and exciting. yes. you are THAT good!
Be my best friend forever? xD BFF, FTW!
Because I know that you won't marry me. xD lol. x3
And it's amazing, really that we're still taking to one another after a year and after all that. You're such an amazing friend. I love you. So. So much.
I can't even begin to express it.
So yush. That ends my review. x3
A year, and I'm still really spaztic and always abusing the smilies with x's. lol.
Should change that by the time I'm not... eh... -sniff
hehe. So, hope you get better soon from your illness! Hang in there! I love you!
If I can fav more than one time, there is no doubt that I'd have faved Cherry Lips a bazzillion times already.
| rainbow cupcake 7/14/09 . chapter 1
X33 That was so awesome! *re-reads*
| egoXlockheart 6/12/09 . chapter 1
OMG, I have people in this room, and so I couldn't laugh at all... You brought me to tears. U_U It was so hard not to at least giggle... I think I might have let out a snort a few times or something. xD
| Rin Ruin 6/11/09 . chapter 1
I really liked your story, it had a nice flow from beginning to end. The ending was perfect, but left us wanting more. You could easily add another chapter or make a sequal, but it is not required for your ending. I would have liked to see what happened when Axel saw Roxas as a guy, what happened when or if Naminé found out about them, expecially when they went out for a date. Also if Kairi was told and how Olette reacted. Absolutly loved it though, and I can't wait to read your other stories.
| 12q 4/18/09 . chapter 1
Awesome. Genius. Ace. Brilliant.
Me loves it a lot.
| mei lynn 64 4/11/09 . chapter 1
oh my wow... this is just like wow. i really love the way roxas reacts throughout the whole night at the club!XD it was frickin funny!:D
| Z3xi0n Ll4m4 3/27/09 . chapter 1
Namine, you totally fell for it, dang, I wish I could make a hundred bucks that easily. XD
| FinalFallenFantasy 1/21/09 . chapter 1
Whoop whoop! Love! And ADORE! It's so cute! Sque!
| TwilightButterflies 1/19/09 . chapter 1
oh my god. that was quite hilarious.
and that line . /The more he went on with this, the more he wanted to quit. But his pride was at stake,/
really? wow. someone has a skewed perspective on life. hm
pride lost from losing a bet / pride lost from dressing like a girl.
which is worse...?
lol. pretty funny.
also not on this fanfic but on your main page, I completely agree with your explanation of Demyx, I hear so many people saying "Demyx is a pushover, Demyx is a wuss" I seriously want to ask them, "and how many times have you beat the game?" jeez. it took me a good 16 tries to beat him. god. that's longer than the rest of them. its just like...no. He doesn't /like/ to fight, not he /can't/ fight. and he is definitely not stupid. I prefer to think he is just...bubbly. that tends to work for him. happy, and slightly psychotic, but not stupid.
| SkyeFlyte 11/14/08 . chapter 1
That was a great story, I loved it
| aoi-no-requiem 10/21/08 . chapter 1
wow I loved it! I admit it was the title that caught my eye first of all, I'm like Naminé in the sense I am garbage crazy. It was a great idea and your langauge is really good. So much for me getting on with my school work tonight XD
| Canvasgirl 10/15/08 . chapter 1
Yay, I finally read it n_n
Lilo, this fic was awesome! And to me, it seemed so different than your other works. More naughty if I dare say ;3 But there was other differences too... if I weren't half-asleep I could probably name them lol
But this idea, it was so cool! I loved the clothes Roxas was wearing, and if Roxas were a girl, or dressed in drag, I'm sure he would wear something just like it -.o Olette, as she usually always is, was awesome in this fic! I love her so much. For sure my faveorite girl in KH.
Well anyway Lilo, I really liked this. You write so well, and AkuRoku is becoming a specialty of yours. Keep up the good work!
| shibara1310 10/12/08 . chapter 1
Omigawd. XD That was hilarious! Oh, and AkuRoku, too. Yay! I had a couple of laughing fits as I was reading this. Woot. I feel proud of myself for reading my third AkuRoku fanfic. :D I think I love it now...though I'm not entriely sure. I love the humor in some fanfics, and I love the angst of it in the game. Hmm...yes, I think I really like AkuRoku now. XD
Ahem. Crossdresser Roxas? -dies- I can perfectly imagine how you described him. Seriously. It's great. And shall I ask if there was Xigbar/Luxord in here? I dunno, I thought that's who those two guys were, or I just wasn't thinking clearly as I was reading that part. Axel: LOL. XD
All in all, I enjoyed reading this.