|Reviews for Cherry Lips|
| 13loves8loves9loves6 10/12/08 . chapter 1
bwheehhehe w this was cute hahaha i love that song!
| reeby10 10/12/08 . chapter 1
soo cute! hehe and i absolutely LOVE crossdresser!roxas! saw this on terra hotaru's page and thought it looked good... and it was! haha i loved it! :D
| RainyJ.T 10/11/08 . chapter 1
I usually don't read crossdressing stories, but that was hilarious! Good job, lol!
| TwintailCat 10/11/08 . chapter 1
Hello again, I read the fic now...
This was great!
Man... I must be tired... can't even write a proper review...
I'd like to see more stories like this.
| terra hotaru 10/11/08 . chapter 1
Gwah, xD ffnet doesn't allow for than one review per chapter. XD So, here I am logged out and giving a review again! XD , you've made me love Garbage by cherry lips so so MUCH! I started to listen to it over and over again and actually SING it! XD If it were not for you, I wouldn't have known for the rest of my life that this cool song exist and your fics definitely depicts the song and you had some really cool originality of it! You make it seem like the whole song was sang and made purely for RoxaS! This purely wins! You're just so awesome! Thank you very much for writing this. And it's for me! XD I'll treasure it forever and ever and ever and forever. XD Thank you, Amy! Thank you! The things you do are just awesome. :)
| terra hotaru 10/10/08 . chapter 1
Aw! *squeals and faints* I don't think I can handle this excitement. Special friend? Aw..aww.. I'm rendered speechless even before I read this fic! XD You are seriously writing this for me? Wow... wow... wow... alright.. I have to calm down... calm down... calm down. XD
Aw, I'm not the first one to review this story.. *enraged* O okay, okay, I got the burning fire now, expect this to be long! even though it's my fault to begin with for not reading this earlier. XD Also, I'm adding this story into favorites before I'm reading it. :D ehehe. Aww, and I'm so glad that you already got many reviews. XD I took a peek and I think I somehow spoiled myself! XD But I'm still keeping the excitement up! XD I totally swicth to the window of your fic right after I revised my essay again! XD Ah, the essay should be tossed to the garbage. :D With my random comments done, I'm moving on!
Ah, I love the opening! XD ehehe. "After all, the two words 'rainy morning' just coincide with 'oh, shit, this is gonna be a bad day'." Totally! XD Love that! XD Ow, Roxas fall down the wood! :D That hurts... At least that would jog his brain up! Hm, I look like shit in the morning too and it's not raining (I don't know what I'd look like in rainy morning...). ehehe. XD always have this pain all around my body. Now I wish for a hot yummy sweet cappucino! :D
O, sausage, me love! XD and Namine is Roxas' sister, right? right? :D O, cousins. I ALMOST got it. XD okay... quin-tesential... um. XD new vocab! Aww, I always love your deep and lovely words. xD *went to a search* aha! typical! hehehe. XD O, they're going to eat! they're going to meet Axel, right, right? XD Where's my wittle Axie? :D ehehe-that's random. O.o :D
Cherry Lips by Garbage? hmm, is that a song? *went to search on Youtube* o! It's really a song! Stupid me for not noticing earlier! *bangs head on the keyboard*.. o
*begin listening to song* Oh. My. God. The song is definitely MADE for ROXAS! XD Thank you! Thank you! XD This is so fun! XD
With your cherry lips and golden curls
You could make grown men gasp
When you'd go walking past them
In your hot pants and high heels
They could not believe
That such a body was for real
It seemed like rainbows would appear
Whenever you came near the clouds would disappear
Because you looked just like a girl
Your baby blues would flash
And suddenly a spell was cast
Roxas and Axel! XD ah *squeals* Again, you amazed me with your awesomeness!
I cannot sleep.. my head's spinning... O.o Well, I'll continue this review! XD Aww, god! Roxas is gonna dress as a girl? That would totally be het... *coughcough* XD Aww, fool a guy and acting like a girl! XD yay! that guy's gonna be Axel and Roxas...is gunnah, Roxas is gunnah.. though.. this is still rated 'T'. XD hahaha. XD
O, I really LOVE your dialogues, you know! Ahaha. XD Roxas' reaction is really cool! "an absolute God-send, I love you, you're wonderful, and beautiful, and muah!" Aw, the dialogues you made, the words you used! It's all to awesome! *dies from your awesomeness!* XD
O, so that's sarcasm? XD haha, I totally LOL-ed! XD Cool! para..phernalia... O, another cool words! belongings! wow... that's a really great word! :D wow... O, o, can I choose? I want perky cute! No, wait.. hot! No, sexy! nu, I can't make up my mind! Make it all of them! XD Shave the leg? SHave the leg? hahaha LOL! you're making me laugh out so loud in the middle of the night! gawd...!
ahaha, razor! Wow! XD this is too cool! I am filled with excitement! *shave shave, poke* Gyah! blood! XD ahaha, just my weird things running! :D wow, Roxas is becoming a girl. *blush* Ah, this is soo... soo.. *faints*. you're purely breathtaking! hour and half torture! Poor Roxie! XD Now, I wonder how he'll meet with the certain redhead we all know and loved so much about! Aww, mini skirt! Roxas is gunnah wear miniskirt! You're really putting me into sheer excitement!
B-B-b-b-b-bra... O.o XD ahahah! cute! now THIS is crossdressing! XD O, I love your details! it all make it feels so real! XD beautiful! I never knew how to make up before. O.o ehehe. :D
"I'm a girl- we all know how to look good." :O Okay, Olette, you totally hurt my esteem there. hahah XD
"his mutters of 'ow' and 'dammit, that hurt'" LOL! XD Roxas is in complete torture! But it all will work very well until he meets the guy whose name starts with an A! Yay! we all know who he is! Aww, I'm excited!
"I was until you talked." XD LOL! Ah, once again the dialogues are PURELY AWESOME!
Now two and a half. :O That's long! :D
"They hurt like a son of a bitch" Aha! Totally love that sentence!
A...a...a...thong? O.o hahaha XD my sis and I always have fun jokes with thongs! XD And... AXel is gonna be the VICTIM! LOL. I'm excited as to where this is going! brunet with scar? XD who who? After I read that scar I was thinking Saix? but nu.. it's brunet... wait a minute! LEON? LOL! Leon is brunet and definitely he had SCAR! XD hahaha
There there! *squeals* AXEL! XD A beautiful blond is coming after you! Alert! Alert-in a very good way! :D Sex on the beach? XD is that the drinks name? I never knew. :D Dance! Yay! Ah *shouts* kiss! they're kissing... they're dancing and kissing! Oh. My. God! You can't believe how much I love and shout out of.. out of... *faints*
GAwd... that paragraph.. that smut... O.o It was purely hot... and breathtaking... I'm ready to faint anytime now... wow.. wow... just wow.. I still can't believe this is a gift fic for me! O.o wow... wait, I'm not going to faint yet until I finish reading it! XD "I know." I was like what? at the same time with Roxas! XD
"I brushed up against something that definitely wasn’t a vagina." GAWD! LOL... dude... you don't know how much I laugheD!
"“It just means that I like you!”" I said shit at the same time while I was reading! LOL. XD Roxas is so NOT gonna blame NAmine for THAT! He's gunnah thank her! XD For getting AXel to him!
AH! THAT CANNOT be the END! nu There's gotta be more! MORE MORE! more! more! nu nu, no, no, no... no... that's the end is it. *twitch* wow... that was really awesome.. breathtaking... gotta find synonims first before I get more repetitive as I write this. Splendid, tremedous, beautiful, amazing, astounding! XD that's all the vocab. Well, there's more. but you know what I mean! XD
"A/N: I hope you liked this, terra hotaru. I'm really sorry for how late it is. If it's not that good, I'm also sorry. I wanted to get it in on time, so I kinda pushed through a block of mine. I really hope this is a good birthday gift. If not, I'm sorry."
Dude, dude! Amelia! don't say sorry! *glare* what'd I say about saying sorry? XD You got it on time! and you don't know how happy you made me. You made me squealed, you made me,..everything/.. I am at a loss for words. Wow... Thank you so so so much for writing this very very amazing fic for me. Really! And you pushed through the block for writing this. Wow... Thanks! really! Thank you! Good? This is a good birhtday gift? GOOD? You've gotta be kidding! This is GREAT! This is purely AWESOME! This is definitely NOT JUST good!
Aw. The one who should be saying sorry is me. I should have read this sooner instead of putting it back. I'm so sorry. School's been hectic on me! Woww... This is my most precious gift ever! I feel like I wanna abduct or something and force you to write forever.. wait.. no. that doesn't sound right. I wanna abduct you and put you into my closet for being so sweet! XD hehe... even though that doesn't sound right too. Woww... really. Thank you very much! I'm really excited and happy. I LOVE this so much! You're the most awesome! wow. wow...
and.. I'm being repetitive again. I should stop before this review keeps going on with tremendous amount of smilies and repeating words. XD Thank you so much! I LOVE you! I really do! LOVE YOU! XD You have definitely make my birthday the most remarkable day ever for this! And I'm throwing the happy birthday right back at ya! I'm really sorry I didn't do anything as awesome on your birthday though.. D: and your birthday's passed... well, not in my timezone, it's still another 7 minutes... but yeah...
Thank you. You. Are. The. BEST. EVER! :D Both as an author and as a person! Awesome! :D Gotta stop before I keep going on with how lucky I am to come to know you! I hope you had a very happy birthday!
| TwintailCat 10/10/08 . chapter 1
I'll read the fic later, for now however...
... I'll write a proper review once I've read the fic. xD
| phillly24 10/10/08 . chapter 1
dat was so funny lol omg keep up da gud work
| Tanja 10/10/08 . chapter 1
Sweet! I like your story. You could write sequesl, where Axel does the cross-dressing. *wink,wink*
| Sorceress Fantasia 10/10/08 . chapter 1
I think the fic's totally adorable! XD It was a silly bet, but hey, look what Roxas got in the end. Surely, that's worth a bit of humiliation. XD
| sana-chan9 10/9/08 . chapter 1
hahah yay roxy!
| Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare 10/9/08 . chapter 1
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE. need i say more? (probably; i mena, logn reviews are always good, but there's nothing i can dislike about this, so if you wanted a detailed review, it's be the longest in history becuase i would quote every stinking line, i love it so much. XD even thought i don't normally go for crossdressing-related fics, especially with Roxas, this was awesome! )
ah, it's the little oneshots like this that make me adore FF.n.
| poison-maestro 10/9/08 . chapter 1
oh, ha. that was very nice
| Unmei-Kibou 10/9/08 . chapter 1
xD funny! and very cute at the end. fave
| Nicrafetix 10/9/08 . chapter 1
Lol. That was really good :)