umm i LOVE this, but if u switch it to bloody RAIN it might seem better. since thats one of the things she said when they first met

Now this is a poem that I like! You've captured that one moment so nicely, and I love the way you had just described it! Not only that, but the way you've shown the depth in this poem is truly amazing. Great job!

Hey.

This was very beautiful. I really do love this poem, even though I have no idea what Kenshin is. But, I bring my own visuals into it, it is a very very very good poem. It has everything; From the perfect title To the reacurring versus, that have such deep sentences to side with them.

It is truely and amazing poem. That's what I think.

Very nicely done. Bravo.