 sabacat 2009-03-07 . chapter 1Aw! Poor Sammy!(but I'd still like to smack him! lol) Dealing with being a teenager is hard enough, but dealing with it while feeling so claustrophobic, confused, and scared of how he's changing is just unbearable. This fic was NICE! It makes his desertion of Dean and going to Stanford far more palatable to think that one of the reasons he left was to actually protect Dean, instead of leaving for purely selfish reasons.
(It about broke my heart when Dean woke up and smiled at Sammy! That just so VERY Dean!)
Wonderful fic! |
 TraSan 2008-12-03 . chapter 1An interesting and believeable idea as to Sam's reasons for leaving for college.
Ah, the anger and angst of teenage years. It seems so earth-shattering, so life-changing at the time. Well conveyed here. |
 EagleGirl6 2008-10-26 . chapter 1OK, it's official. Cliffhanger wasn't a fluke (you already knew that, I'm just sharing my own observation). This one's a-freakin-mazing too. Jeez-lu-eez. Have you written any more about Sam leaving? I would love to read more from this time. It's been Quite A While since I was that age, but you put me right in Sam's skin, totally understanding his state of mind. You're a professional writer, right? Just slumming around here for practice? It must be so. If your betas are ever busy, or you just need a final proofread, I'd be honored. Just sayin. I really gotta go clean my house now.
Thank you for brightening up my weekend :)
Kelly |
 sweetysmart0505 2008-10-20 . chapter 1Really cute story! |
 supernaturalsammy67 2008-10-13 . chapter 1OMG HUN- this was pretty bloody mindblowing!
i LOVED IT!!
eessh...yeah definatley different to your usual stuff, but i really really liked it- like beyond omg wow!
LOL
your normal stuff- dont get me wrong i'd die for, but this was very- in your face exact how he'd feel and a theres a lot more between the lines than just an angry Sam
i mean,who hasnt felt so mad before?
but wow..
really great job
thanks for posting hun! haha
vented my own anger
lol |
 SherryDarling 2008-10-13 . chapter 1Now that's what you call Sammy angst! I loved the sudden change from pissed at Dean to 'oh my god what have I done!' when he cracks his head. Nice idea that this is the reason he goes off to Stanford too.
I always enjoy reading what you write so keep it coming! :) |
 V.R. Jennings 2008-10-09 . chapter 1An absolutely amazing story! I'm not much of a Sam fan, but this - with hurt Dean - is exceptional. As I've said before, your hurt Dean is the BEST (maybe I'm evil too...LOL :D) Keep up the great work!! ;D |
 Enkidu07 2008-10-09 . chapter 1wow. so powerful. and what a reality check for Sam. I am super impressed and so glad you posted! I love it! |
 bLaDeoFtHeNeBuLa 2008-10-09 . chapter 1wow, that was deep mish :D
I think the swearing made the whole theme of it more effective
very good, well done
x |
 Lisa Paris 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Wow - really strong story. I loved it. |
 Amarintha 2008-10-09 . chapter 1and I'm mad at you for writing this why?
There are some places I would have used goddamn instead of fuck/ing.
And some places I wouldn't have used swearing at all, but, I've been that angry. I know how that feels, how you think. The shit that runs thru your head.
It was good writing. |
 Orange Autumn 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Very, very awesome! You did a great job of revealing Sam's anger and frustration. Like a front row seat in a moment of his life. Thanks for sharing! |
 Sushi Chi 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Mish! Ooh Mish!
That was freakin' awesome! I loved it. Absolutely spiffy. I'm glad you posted it. This is a story that 'ill probably stick in my head all day. Wonderfully done, midear.
It also adds to reasons why Sam left. Terrificly done.
Hugs and Love
Sushi |
 Ghostwriter 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Very nice. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 apieceofcake 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Nicely done..can see this happening as to why Sam leaves.
And hurt Dean is always nice ;-) |