Excellent from start to finish. A very compelling read.

Nice ending. Like the back and forth between String and Cait at the end, so like the two of them. Never make things too easy.

Good last line.

Alright, kinda knew where you were heading with this one for a while, but that was still an unexpected twist. So do we say Cait finally gets her man (oh, wait...that's the Canadian mounties, sorry) or she sweeps him off his feet? ROTFL

Entertaining chapter, look forward to the rest.

Who would've thought a crack on the head would be a bright spot? Yea, Bridget! Yea, Kenny! and Yea, Hawke! Nicely played.

Argh! What more is there to say?

Here's hoping Hawke's right about Frank. I don't think I much like the idea of Bridget having to break the news to Cait either.

Unexpected twist to the action, nice surprise chapter there.

"I love that kid, but some times she has all the subtlety of a bull in a china shop and she has a way of putting people’s noses out of joint, forgetting that we need their help!” Santini informed..." huh, coming from Dom? considering the scene at the airport, pretty funny.

Well, that was quite some story! Definitely kept me interested throughout and an ending I hadn't quite expected, it's about time they got it together though! LOL great job as always.

Thank goodness for fiery tempered women, lol.

Nice repartee between Cait and Dom. Whether you see it actually happening or not, nicely done, well-written scene, kudos.

Here's hoping it looks better in the morning...

a little heavenly help wouldn't be amiss though.

Ooh, definitely got me hooked (as if i wasn't already). Will Bridget be able to pull this off? Hope so!

"Nine lives. Like a cat. Megan thought ruefully then reminded herself that she had always believed that you made your own luck in this life.
Obviously Stringfellow Hawke was better at it than others.
He was also too stubborn to die.
He felt that he had a mission, a purpose, and he would not easily relinquish his hold on this life until he had completed that mission and fulfilled that purpose.
He was single minded and stubborn, and in her experience, men like that were hard to kill simply because they believed that they were immortal."

Couldn't sum up Hawke better than that. Thumbs up.