That was great. Will you be doing more Twilight? You have a real knack for writing Edward and Nessie. Thanks for sharing it.

This was so adorable. I completely agree that there aren't many Edward/Nessie fics out there. Good ones that is. You did a great job and the 'princess style' thing was so cute. I was thinking 'Aw' the whole time.

Great job!

Love,
Shavera

Awe! Very cute!

how...cute?

hey i am likeing this!

I loved it...Father-daughter moments between Edward and Nessie are my favorite...!

Oh Edward! He's such a lovely father. =D

That was really nice and cute! I liked it!

Very, very cute. I've never read one like that!

omg, i LUVED that! It was so cute, you captured that Edward/Renesmee moment so perfectly. -sighs happily-

Aw, that was adorable! I loved this. Great, great job! (:

Angelica

This is a really nice story, and its written exactly as though Stephenie Meyer had written it. It's a lovely story.

aw loved it so cute

Aw, that was so cute. Great job! (:

Amazing story, enough said :)

"...little reminders of Bella's human life that he loved so much."
That was perfection :)