You writing a sequel to this would stab me with awesomeness.

So please do.
.. PLEASE D:

I always loved Mercedes X Ingway! wish there are more fanfic base on this pairing...
nice work! I hope you make more fanfic with this pairing ;D

I loved this. Wish there was more.

Lovely. I felt my chest collapse a bit at this, really. It's a really interesting take on what happens in the future for Ingway and Mercedes and you've managed to keep their relationship bittersweet. It makes me sad, but I can't imagine them having a happy ending, no matter how much I want it.

I love you, seriously. Ingway x Mercedes is my absolute favorite couple in Odin Sphere and I was so sad they had such a crappy ending...this is just what I wanted, something kind of bittersweet and hopeful and totally believable with how the game ended.

Oh god, that just owned by emotions.

I love Ingway x Mercedes as a couple, and I feel that they were robbed! Robbed I say!

Excellently written. Very beautiful! This is going on the favorites.