 The Magic Pocket Turtle 3/15/07 . chapter 1Ha ha, that's so funny. You've got to love Pennywise, even if he's a whacko shapeshifting-juvinocidal-cannibalistic-clown-bug-thing. If he weren't so creepy he'd be utterly hilarious. Imbecilic Links who join dance lines with much joy and celebration are cool too, but they don't really stand up to Pennywise.
Since this is pretty much a parody I don't have much to say about your writing, except that you have this spiffy little flare for analogies and description that makes it entertaining to read the details. |
 blessedsilence 11/25/03 . chapter 1whoa. come on mate, you have to add onto this, maybe throw in some lyrics with a shake shake here and a woohoo there, ya know? I think i'll join you in that drink, i can handle a cross dressing squall, but steven king in rinoa's outfit? oh my... what an interesting cast you've assembled, i never would have thought to throw in all lf my favorite people together to make up one entirely hilarious fic yo know, usually i love giving out criticism, but i can't think of anything to criticise against. you make virtually no grammatical/spelling errors whatsoever, and the crossover seems to make sense at least (but um, where did link come from? and why did he only get two sentences? *cries*) please, when you have time, add more to this. it is incredibly funny. |