this story and essence of innocence r both great and funny stories i loved the line in essence of innocence, where Albel talks about guilt being as sadistic as him :D

I'm enjoying Fayt's thoughts... XD... ah, there's nothing wrong with humor.

I am so intrigued by this story, and your other, "Essence of Innocence". I love how you express them more in action than you do in a dialogue. I'm looking forward to more chapters!

humor we need humor. humor is a good thing too much Angst is bad. i once read a story that had 6 chapters of Angst it was so bad i almost felt like killing my self because of the Angst. it was so annoying it it didn't seem to be getting any better. that is the reason why i read the 6 chapters hoping it gets better. but yeah great chapter even if it was short it would be interesting if Fayt got a little sicker and Albel had to take care of him.

. . .Kitty got claws.

Don't worry Fayt, you're not alone. I'm sick too D:

TEH PAINFUL MADDNESS!

No words can describe zee beauty of this fic, it DESERVES MORE REVIEWS!

RAWR!

Aw, how cute. The end is just perfect, even cuter when truly visualizing it. YOU ARE FANTASMIC! MAJOR KUDOS!

And I'm so wordless of this greatness that these reviews are beyond poor. XD

CNMY

No matter what, my grin just won't disappear! I already ADORE this. It's like that whole 'behind the scenes' thing.

My lord, I am such a weirdo.

And so rabid-ey when it comes to fangirlism of my favorite pairing.

HUZZAH FOR PURE EPICNESS AND GREATNESS.

YOU ARE THE EPICNESS TOO! . . .Onto the next chappie.

-faving/alerting- :D

CNMY

Gawd, how sad there are barely any lovely Albel/Fayt fics around here.

But, you brighten my day anyway! I'm honestly not into P.O.V's, but with this I'll be willing to make an exception.

;D

YES, THE BEAUTIFUL BUTTON TO CONTINUE IS THERE!

Yay.

Excuse me while I start squealing xD

CNMY

I really like it :-) I hope you'll write another chapter soon!

i've read both the stories and im anxious to start comparing them when the other has a few more chapters. please update soon!

Yay! An update! - Please continue?

'But bad luck wasn’t done raping my happiness' I know I alread told you this, but I love that line xD

I cant wait to hear Albel's side of this scene 8DD

Keeping Writing.

- Shan.

I really liked this chapter and I hope that you update soon. The one thing I noticed, though, was the confusion with the word lied. It should be laid or lay. Anyway, I hope that you update soon with the next chapter.

Thank you for the update. I'm looking forward to next chapter. Hope you update soon.

I love any stories that has fyat and abel in them. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.