Phwoar.

Ultimate Wet Dream for any Hakkai fan. For how can you love Hakkai, and not love Tenpou ?

And not love them together.

Naked.

M.

>:B

wow!! hahah, i had to reread some of the paragraphs when you started switching pov's then i realized it didn't matter :)

great fic. the concepts are rather mind boggling to me; the bond between twins is fascinating and i like the way you wrote this one. keep it up! XD

This is wonderful and weird and very sexy. I think it's a very well thought out plot, and psychologically believable. The differences between the two are well defined, which makes the ending really lovely. Thanks!

Okay, first i was wondering "how the hell do you have twincest?!" Now, i know. :D Also, are you planning to change your name to macavitykitsune, or is that some other site's user?

I guess that this story is okay... Got a little boring in the middle, but maybe because you explained too much or something? (God knows i do too much of that to everyone...) And it's just my opinion, okay, don't get mad or anything...