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Chromde
2008-10-19 . chapter 1
The kind of things a dad does. Very sweet.
DrewKids
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Hey.

Umm...this was the only way we could do this. Thanks about the warning thing. We forgot about the guidelines. Thank You!
sleuth girl
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
cute cute cute!
Red Hardy
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Aw, that was too adorably sweet! My absolute favorite part:

"This time, the smile came easily. It was real. "All right, Wendy," he said. "Let's fly there!"

And he swooped her up, and began to jog ahead of the group. He ignored Callie's warnings to slow down, Frank's calls not to drop her. It was Halloween. Time for Peter and Wendy to explore Bayport, get their candy, and when at last they'd return to their fort, maybe he could steal some of Hook's booty without the pirate captain noticing...

A guy couldn't live on just Three Musketeers and peanut butter kisses, after all."

So, so sweet!! Thanks for sharing! :-)
ilsablaine
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
OMG! I love this! This is by far the cutest hallowe'en story I have ever read and it is made even better by knowing this could be a reality. I can absolutely see Frank and Joe doing this for their children. Wonderful! Thanks for posting.
josie hardy
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
aw, that was cute :)
Lady Emily
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Lol Joe and Frank as Peter Pan and Hook! The Hardys WOULD do themed trick or treating with their kids... And "Wendy" was adorable.

What a cute little story. Thanks!
Miss Fenway
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Hahahaha. That was really cute. I loved it when they quoted Peter Pan. Did you ever see 'Finding Neverland'? It is an awesome movie. But anyway, once again I thought this was really cute and funny.
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