Isn't fate sick, in the fact the your worst fear is always the one that comes to life?

I really like the story so far,Keep up the good

work and don't give up!

*ok so what's the speed of dark?*-Letty

I think that you have potential and should finish what you started

I liked the interpretation of Lex's feelings. And frankly, I liked the whole thing!

hey, love the first two chapters!

I really like where this story is going. Continue? Please? UPDATE SOON! _ Luv it so far!

Keep writing! I love Lex and there really aren't many stories with him as the lead.

Please keep going! I love Lex! Well written with a peculiar air of mystery that defines Lex Luther. I would like to see where this goes.

Um...you may want to try editing this in another word processor or use a different file format, it's really difficult to read without paragraphs.

Hey, I think this is a great start, and I'd love to read more of it. Lex is such an intriguing character, and it's great to get inside his head.

This is good I like Lex and Don't see to much of him without clark or the others. you should right some more

I think you are off to a great start. However,I wish you luck trying to capture Lex's charater. I think the young man is unpredictedible and mysterous as they come. But that is probably why yours writting about him. I would like to know were your taking this story though so please keeping up the good work.

P.S. I am a Michael Rosenbaum fan. Thanks for posting.