aww...sweet!

M?

Rated M?

it is okay. i feel it could be longer especially the ending. i found the end rather lacking.

one other thing WHY THE HELL IS THIS RATED M?

it is a good fic but you need to sort out your ratings...

It would have been cuter if he commented with "she's a smart girl and you should blabbity bloobitty blah". At least, that's my opinion. :)

oh,

I'll be in the background.

nice story.

...hmm. good story acctually. need to remind myself to beat up sinslayer for saying it was bad.

sinslayer: one birds opinion, annie. on birds opinion.

Now this is getting intresting

um...i'm wondering how this is rated M?

lmao! . but technically all mammels come from "eggs". good job with this.

GABGABGABGAB! Great job on this one! Sorry if I didn't review. Just make it a bit longer next time, k? BTW,

SOMETHING-SOMETHING

ON THE FIFTH FLOOR STAIRCAASE.

I'MMA GIVE YOU THIS LETTAH

OF ALL THINGS I CAN'T SAY!

uh kinda cute

Man i havent read fanfic in like forever... i hope u update *SaSuHina NejiTen

HAHA i daydream in boring classes all the time, or read new fanfic chapters hehehe cute chapter, update soon! hehehe

Platypuses are marsupials. :D