 slytherinsal 3/8/11 . chapter 1Putting right what i wrote as an overall review because I had understood incorrectly about the 1st world war land army, apologies for a blank in my knowledge and thanks Dichroic for increasing my knowledge |
 slytherinsal 3/8/11 . chapter 3beautifully done.
if you haven't read Belfast Docks' 'Secret Garden' story 'aftermath' you may want to find it...
The land girls were world war two not world war one but never mind... it was a forgiveable anachronism |
 Eavis 6/28/10 . chapter 3Oh! Lovely. I think you've captured her style so well. Only one thing, though. I thought they couldn't ask It for any more wishes? Or I may be remembering wrong. Anyway, well done.
God be with you,
Eavis |
 GoldenAshes 10/10/08 . chapter 3Really very good! Amazingly like E. Nesbit. The only thing was...the Psammead left the sandpit didn't he? From 'Phoenix and the Carpet', right? However, that's inconsequential and it was very good. I loved Noel's 'Flanders Field'. Somehow tragically funny. |