That was really good! (: Great job.

This is very good. I've seen the "Ugly Betty" writers play with the idea but never take it to fruition. Both the Mexican and Colombian versions have Betty falling for her boss and him finally falling for her in the end. This is perfect and exactly how I would envision it happening! You are amazing, keep up the good work!

I loved it.

Brandy

Finally! The perfect Detty story! Nicely in character, and very touching.

WOW that was beyond words good... so good I read it towo times in a row... one of my all time favourite Detty fics!

great story, and well timed. it took me just the right amount of time to listen to the song and reaad your fic at the same time. lovely job!

That was so amazing. The emotions were brilliant and I could imagine the whole thing.

Definetley favorited!

Oh! Oh oh oh! That was just... wow! I loved it! So very in character and I want this exact scene in the show!
Amazing

This was really cute. I especially liked the line about the man who has Betty's love being the luckiest son of a bitch in the world. Too cute!

That is one of the sweetest and best Detty fan fictions I have ever read! Can you please make a sequel or something?! Cuz i will totally read it!

Wow, this was great. Love it.

Wow what an amazing story you just wrote!
I totally fell in love with it from the beginning...completely and utterly fabulous...your characters were so identical to the ones in the show, I could see that happening on the show...Lord knows I want it to!
Anyway I LOVED it...amazing...:)

That was an excellent excellent story! You're a great writer! That story gave me chills down my spine! I totally loved the way you drafted the story and building it up to the climax! =D Write more soon! Thank you for a lovely story!

Great one-shot, I really loved the way you characterised Daniel and Betty, it would be great if you continue this story!!

WOW! You blew me away! What a wonderfully written, heart-rending, beautiful piece of work! I loved it! The emotion in this was so raw, so real and incredibly authentic. My heart broke for both of them and then was happily put back together when they finally realised their mutual love for one another; culminating in that perfect first kiss. Simply stunning. Thanks so much for dreaming this up and sharing it with us! Detty all the way!