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teddikins
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
the whiny = wo ai ni thing was funy

very cute.
kestrel
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
You may have found it difficult to write them bit was obviously worth the effort. This oneshot is so good and Sora and Riku are perfect. The whole thing just flows so well from one age to the next and you understand that you're following Sora through it all. I loved the ending as well. I didn't quite realise that Sora was talking to someone but then it made sense cos the way its written is how you'd expect him to speak - exactly how he thinks! I loved this and I sincerely hope it's not your last Soriku fic
Identity-x-Dragon
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Aw...
So good!
Wo ai ni. Wo ai ni. I actually caught on to that. Hahaha Riku! I laugh at you. :P

Leon nudging Cloud and Axel = stalker? I like how each couple turned out. Riku saying whiny without even knowing what could happen. xD

我 爱 你。

...
Don't take it too personally, I really love you for writing the fanfiction, that's all. :)
Innocent KH
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
wow...this was the most engulfing, amazing, entrancing, breath-takin story i have read in a LONg time...like literally..woow!! 0.o..hehehe ^.^

am so glad they all got married and everything! it's just soo adorable and cute! Yay! ^.^

and the whole 'wo ai ni' being whiny wen said fast was just..pure pure originality and such an interesting twist! like WOW!! i loved this ^.^

and yh, i agree wiv ALL THE BEAUTIFUL REVIEWS U GOT! each couple is cute in it's cute adorable way!

aah..but am sad this is da last story of soriku u wirte...its just..wow!

please write more sora-riku-ness? ur talent in writing is just very unique and creative! i'd love to read more of that adorable couple!! in ur very amazing style!! ^.^

Anyways: i lurved this! RawR! ^.^ hehehe
Melty Bagle
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
Oh my god! That was SO cute! great job! I absolutely loved the whole "whiny"/"wo ai ni" bit! ^__^
Miharu-tenshi
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
eh? the last RikuSora fic!? no, you can't do that!! -whines- ok...i just got affected by the fic...yep, they're definitely a cute couple. -squeals- but i love Axel and Roxas more, so let me vote for them! now it's a tie of who's the cutest couple, lol.

i know what 'i love you' in Chinese...and when Kairi asked it, i thought she wants Sora to confess in Chinese. but then when Ursula said it fast...my brain quickly caught up. -giggle- wo ai ni = whiny. and oh, Cloud and Leon are married, and now Riku and Sora too! i'm so happy... -tears of happiness- poor their parents not being able to have grand children, haha.

each couple is very cute in their own way, actually. Leon nudged Cloud and Axel following Roxas everywhere he goes, Riku and Sora giving nicknames to each other...lol. i wish to see in Roxas' point of view...as a sequel! whee~ thanks for the fic!
Kotorigaro
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
Wah, that is so CUTE! xD Leon and Cloud's story of first interaction made me laugh.
Twisting it at the end so Sora was actually talking to you as a character (rather than simply a fic written in first person) was a nice touch, and rather unexpected. Lovely work, keep it up!
Bluebird
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
I loved it. The end- except not really, you see...

A long, long time ago poor little me read your masterpiece that is "Vanilla", as well as "Vanilla Soufflé". Now this, in and of itself is not that surprising, considering the amount of time I dedicate to sifting through fanfiction sites for diamonds such as your works.

Then, by some strange working, and a couple months out of the KH fandom, I pass by an LJ reccing Gundam Wing fics- as well as KH. Whiny was one of them, and upon my quest to find more of your enrapturing works, and friend your LJ, I got carried away to FFN, only to discover- alas!- I've already read your pieces. And fangirled sufficiently.

Now that you've had your interesting story for the day, I shall bookmark you and hope to cross paths with your pages at least once more.
Danybel-Haine
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
LOL Miss Ursula... I would freak out if i had a teacher like her

"the guy you’re trying to confess to is always the densest." EXTREMELY true... xD

i loved it! is so cute!
hollowFAERIE
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
Aw, cute! I love RikuSora~~ *squeals in delight*

Oh, and i love the format of the fic. The whole thing was like a dialogue!! I love that type ^_^
Peachi Bunni
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
saucesome :D
Kawaii Kisu
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
Aw!! That was so cute and whiny. ^w^ I loved how you added the whole talk with the cleaner at the end, I just find it kind of funny.
And I have the sudden urge to learn Chinese now...
Anywho, this was perfect and beyond cute, and I don't have enough words in my vocabulary to explain just how much I loved this.
mochiusagi
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
aw so cute! you are right thoug, wo ai ni does sound like whiney.
nise-nami
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
OMG! that was so cute and brilantly planned out. I loved it and will read it again. great job!
megheartryan
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
Kya!~
I was so excited when I got a notice about a story from you >.< and you definitely didn't disappoint (but, then again, you never do XD). This was so utterly..adorable. I wish I knew a better word for it, but that's what first came to mind. The fact that 'whiny' sounds like 'I love you' in Chinese is so neat and kudos to you for thinking of it :D
Anyway, I really hope this isn't your last Riku/Sora fic - you write them so well (and it's my OTP so it makes me happy XD)!
Great job on this, by the way!
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