 Rugrat247 2009-11-29 . chapter 9Ahh, Rose. You always impress me with these ideas. The medallions. How everything's connected together. How do you think up all this??
I really enjoyed this chapter. Excellent... andg great writing! <3 |
 Pfefferminztea 2009-11-25 . chapter 3^^
With friends like that, you´d think Tea would be busy enough without any additional trouble... but something tells me that she that she won´t be that lucky.
I hope you´ll give us a chance to be "present" at that talk between Mai and Tea?
I can´t believe that you made von Krolock marry Sarah... or the other way round, whatever. But I guess she´s the only one who would really qualify for the position. ^^
Sorry that this is turning into a series of thrown-together comments, I just don´t know what kind of a general statement I could give about your story that would involve something I haven´t said before... |
 Pfefferminztea 2009-11-25 . chapter 2I get the feeling of repeating myself, but... I like this.
Very much.
Especially that cute scene with Mokuba and Seto.
They´re so different, yet nothing at all could separate them.
And I lovelovelove von Krolock!
“I would have remembered a temper such as yours.”
SO great.
Mokuba is enjoying his role?
So am I! |
 Merilly 2009-11-22 . chapter 1 That was very polite german. I don't know anyone around me who would use "Guten Abend." as a greeting. ^^- It starts interesting, but I guess that's normal if it takes place right after the story from before.
Well, good work. There isn't so much to say for a first chapter but it sounds promising. ^__^ (Even though other chapters are already out -cough-) |
 Pfefferminztea 2009-11-21 . chapter 1You´re definitely crazy. ^^
Is this von Krolock the one I think he is?
That would make two musicals in this "mystery timeline"... AND they´re the same ones I use/intend to use for my own "mystery"! But I guess that´s my fault, since your fanfiction is older. I´m sorry, I really didn´t know about you using "Dance of the Vampires" as well!
Um. I was supposed to give you a review to your story, not rant about other topics!
Though I was a little disappointed at first that you wrote there would only be "mild" Seto/Tea romance in this fic, you are, of course, right - this way, it´s much more realistic.
I loved the way you portrayed Seto in this chapter, mentioning those details of his "everyday" life - how grateful he is to Tea for not mentioning anything about his feelings, how he kept her birthday card, but not the others, how he remembers the Ancient Egyptian voices...
And I´m delighted to hear of Joey again! He´s actually one of my favorite characters, though much neglected, so I´m always delighted if someone writes from his perspective. :)
And it seems to me that it would be only too much like him to stay awake for a video game. ^^
That little talk with Delphi was great! I thinkt this might well make it to my gallery of favorite fanfic moments... |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2009-11-20 . chapter 9I love this thickening plot. I also find it very funny that Borealis liked the sandwiches. You have set up so nicely for the next stage and I saw Jackal references. Very interested to see how the two will reference each other.
TDH |
 se-tar 2009-11-20 . chapter 9Wow~ I can't believe you updated without having an unbelievably long break ;D
The mystery is unfolding and folding again more, I like it XD
Joey and his anti-vampire efforts are so hilarious XD
Thank you for updating sooner, please keep the pace ^_^ |
 LuckyLadybug 2009-11-20 . chapter 9LOL. Mai's reaction to Joey's food is priceless, as is Joey's explanation and his crack about Anput. But man, poor Joey! Bad dog! XD;
Marik's tale of the past is so creepy, especially the ice storm and the fifty harvested souls. o.o And counting up how many more there are to go in the present... That definitely makes things even more tense.
Everyone splitting up to investigate places... That's going to be interesting.
I love Bakura and Duke being there. They're my current favorites to write about. Bakura's speech pattern is so cute. |
 Graysky 2009-11-16 . chapter 8 Update please!! I love this alot. I hope they find Ishizu soon. Poor Marik. And can Tea and Kaiba confess love or something? And I'm not so sure about Pip. Can he be trusted? Well update. |
 LuckyLadybug 2009-10-18 . chapter 8Roland = a true background character, but such an important one. **always did like him.** Poor Seto, having to worry that now he's hurt or worse, and that maybe he himself did something to him!
But Seto's flat line about not being aware of going to work is undeniably amusing. XD;
Intriguing, about thinking von Krolock might be involved...
And poor Téa with her horrible nightmares!
Of all ways she could have met him, I wouldn't have imagined them playing DDR together. XD LOL. Fun! **snarks @ Borealis being amused when he quits.**
The introductions go very interesting. X3 Poor Téa, not being about to trust him, and him giving a sometimes-nickname. Pip fits too well, though. LOL.
The confrontation with Vulsor is so intense! Especially her snapping when Téa mentions her mother. o.o **wouldn't have expected her to reveal that.** You really have an intriguing, complex character in Aranea Vulsor.
And LOL at him hiding from her! Poor guy.
So horrible, to have to worry that something similar to the Millennium Items' creation may be the missing peoples' fate!
LOL, poor Marik. XD But yes, at least Borealis is friendly!
Such a horrifying theory! o.o Poor everyone! |
 starwefter 2009-10-17 . chapter 8Good heavens! What ever is happening to Seto?
And Marik being licked to death by a husky? Priceless! (Never thought I'd see THAT happen...)
Every update to this is like a jewel being handed to me -- rare and wonderful. I don't mind the wait, because it is always worth it. |
 Rugrat247 2009-10-17 . chapter 8Yay! Marik!
O.O Aranea's fiance?? Poor guy!
Agh. Cliffhanger! I wanna know what Marik's theory is! Whatever it is, this doesn't sound good. Not in the least. DX
Great chapter! Update soon! |
 Setoglomper 2009-10-17 . chapter 8Loved this chapter! And the possibility of Madame Mystica being someone other than good is rather interesting! Can't wait for more =) |
 The Duelist's Heiress 2009-10-17 . chapter 8Great job. Loved Borialas that was awesome.
TDH |
 Yokai Summoner 2009-05-24 . chapter 7Great update! The suspense is really building up. I really like when you give Joey lines...it's always funny when he opens his mouth. but poor Seto...his ignorance to accept that the Anubis medallion is bad news is amazing, but I'm sure he'll learn the hard way. LOL!
Keep Up The Great Work!
Yokai (^_^) |