Really gorgeous, the Sinedd-Tin comparison was beautiful. The idea of it made me really sad, too. You write so touchingly, it's heart-wrecnhing and this story seems to really come from the heart. I love it.

I don't like the pairing but I love the fic. The comparison the tin was very cool and I like the way it was used all the way through, you are also very good at giving descriptions.

This was freaking brilliant. The best Galactik Football fanfiction I have ever read by far, which is the reason I am reviewing because I never normally do. It is an odd pairing, but it's written beautifully by you and the idea of Sinedd being like corroding metal was stunning. I love it!

I loved the idea of this! Cute, but angsty and the Sinedd-Tin comparison was great.

That was a beautiful story :)

i'm not too fond of this pairing but i love the idea of comparing Sinedd with corroding metal and the plot! great one-shot, i can't wait to hear more stuff from you!!

This is good , i truly enjoyed reading your story. You grasped the pairing really well and the descriptions were done accurately. Some bad grammar here and there, but it's not something that would stick I hope.All in all keep writing , you've got the talent for it.

"Just a day, just an ordinary day, just trying to get by. Just a boy, just an ordinary boy, but he was looking to the sky. And as he asked if I would come along, I started to realise. Every day he finds just what he's looking for, like a shooting star, he shines..." Ordinary Day by Vanessa Cartlon, this time. Again, there are no direct references in this but it just reminds me of that song. Bloody wonderful, though. The odd pairing, the odd love. It just works because you've made it believable, make it realistic for the characters. Sineff never wanted to fall in love, and neither did Tia. She had someone, he hates almost naturally. Great work...this really portrayed them perfectly.

Is very nice! I understand little, but the general idea was great.

The comparison of Sinedd to a metal, corroding and breaking down was brilliant. The entire concept of this was great, so brilliant work!

I love it, it's odd but cute.

Indeed strange pairing and strange love, but I like it. I like it a lot.

Wowwie! Simply gorgeous idea. I loved it!

Odd pairing, but I love it.

That's it, I fell in love! lol. I like this story, even this pairing isn't one of my favourites. ;) Keep writing!

~bya