This is so sad. But beautifully written. And I'm sorry it's taken me so long to wander onto it. ;)

I definately felt bad for poor Richard--his problems in the office and with Lois were rough enough before he gets killed precisely because Jason isn't his son. But his attempts at protecting him were very admirable.

Plus we finally discover where Kevin came from.

Very, very nice, and I'm so glad that you're expanding on this universe of yours.

That was so sad. And...I *like* Talia. She wouldn't have done that, not in the comics, at least. =(

Great story, though.

Talia... Rargh.

Ahh it is Talia!! I wondered if it would be.. great tie in!

Poor, poor Richard. Poor Jason as well, having to see that.

Well, I'll be waiting.

You know, I really did like Richard. I'm glad there's a prequel; how many chapters are you planing for this one?

So I'm still sticking around. I love Richard (poor guy!)... and I'm sorry to see him go. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

I didn't expect you do to a prequel! I'm glad you did though.. can't wait to see your perspective on this fandom!