'Apparently olive branches weren't strong enough to build a bridge with.'

Ohh I like that line.

Fantastic stuff!

Awesome. Simply awesome. Perfect characterisation.

I liked it. Loved your handling of the possible interaction of the brothers. Will be looking out for more of your stuff.

That's a really scary thought... Some demon using Dean to get Sam to do its dirty work... But I can so see it happening... Man, season four has the potential to be the best season ever.

Nicely done. You capture their voices so well.

Hope your have some *cough* other brothers bunnies hopping around in your future as well. If not, at least now I know where else to look. *sigh* I know, these boys are fun to play with, too.

That was fantastic! It was definitely what was needed in the episode you did a great job i loved it!!

Love it, Great job.

Excellent writing. I especially enjoyed the last line. It was a pleasure to read

Wow! That was extremely well written. I think you nailed their voices perfectly. My favorite was, ""Good. 'Cause it's kind of hard to miss the parallels here. On the one hand, there's this guy being a freak and us maybe having to kill him. On the other hand, there's you being a mathlete and all." Dean shook his head solemnly. "I know it's gotta be rough, Sammy, but I'm here for you."

Excellent! Now can you add some additional chapters for that ep?? Please. Thanks so much for posting.

Very intense. Just talking. Dean needs to get over it. Hooray for Sammy!

This was awesome. Fit right into the episode! My favorite was when you listed all the ways Sam had changed - it really broke my heart because it was true! And Dean was perfect, silently letting Sam talk and being supportive without really having to say anything. Great job. I really enjoyed!

Wonderful job with your missing scene. It fit perfectly into the episode.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

I really, really wanted Sam to answer Dean's question of how long he had known about the demon blood with 'since Cold Oak'. And you did in the story so that makes me happy.

I loved this! It fit in seamlessly with the episode, provided a bit more of the brotherly interaction I wanted, had Sam explaining some of why he lied, had him coming clean about knowing his mom had recognized YED (which I really wanted him to do), AND was very well-written. You did a great job of keeping the boys in character, and keeping this in line with the episode in emotion and tone. The ending was so bittersweet.

Great work!! I hope you'll write more SPN stuff soon!! I'm faving this one!

AW OMG HUN!
this was soo soo awesome-omg i know if all the eppy's are as amazing as this lol

loved the added scene hun
we totally needed it
ans you hit head on !!