Short and lovely. Embodied hitsugaya's personality perfectly. I'm very critical when it comes to grammar and deliveries. Sometimes I just see a misspelled word in the first sentence of the opening and it deters me from reading the whole piece. Well done, please write some more hitsuhina or even a sequel to this.

It was so sad and sweet that it made me want to cry. (In a good way).

That was a really pretty story.

That doesn't make much sense, but it was... pretty. _.

I liked your descriptions, they weren't overdone but they had detail. Teehee!

Wow; you can make so much fit into so little! This is a great story! it flows nicely from the friendly conversation to the inner feelings and all. Love the ending sentence.

that was sweet and great! loved every bit of it.

Aww. That was very cute. Despite how short it was, you could still pick up on their personality through the way they spoke. How he would just look at everything and she would comment about everything. Very nice, hopeful little scene.

One note though“shoes made faint clacking sounds on the carpeted floor
Can shoes clack through carpet? If anything, I don’t think they’d make a reverberating sound…

But that’s just one note. Overall I really enjoyed reading this. Smoothly done.)