Aww. I love it~ It was very well-written and explained. I find it cute, too. Using the song to relate with the story is a nice idea. Good job! :3

I wonder why this wonderful oneshot has too few reviews.

The dreamy, fragmented and slightly melancholic atmosphere of this story captures my heart. Yet, at the end of the story, we feel the light and warm of a "new beginning". The song? Only one word: GREAT!

Among your stories, I like this one the most :X.

a simplle child's song into something so meaningful. wonderful job

Cool story could you write more, because I think it could be more than one-shot.
It can be a Shinichi×Shiho story. That is what I think, but you could let it be a one-shot.
Good luck with other stories!