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alexiaashfold 12/10/11 . chapter 3
Bloodelf lineages are totally screwed up, how would someone with a speck of sanity can endure to be aboard that unstoppable process of self-destruction? Although Kiril should be held accountable for that disgraceful escape, yet it contains no connotation for his permanent waiver of riddance of that deleterious filial reckoning beacons, perhaps after which Kiril can be proselytized into a durid promising the reunion of the two, it will only be a shame if he just tried. Anyway there is no guarantee of a gleeful ending, after all life is fragile.
annon 7/19/11 . chapter 3
You got the characterization of druids spot on! Calm, kinda goofy in a hippie way, and knowledgeable. Love Tamarack.
Great story and writing.
98kiko 6/3/11 . chapter 3
Nice job I liked it.
Koori Coeur 12/16/10 . chapter 3
This was great, and SO cute. XD There weren't any (or at least only minor) spelling/grammar errors, or I don't remember anything especially jarring.
The story was great, as were the characters. That scene before they finally kissed/made love. It was EPIC! I always seem to like the pre-furfilled parts of romance flicks, and yours definately didn't let me down. Angst done perfectly. XD
Merci pour le uploading! :D
PMSingTeenager 5/5/10 . chapter 3
. . . heartbreaking
MMR92 2/1/10 . chapter 3
Omg I cried like a baby at the end. But it was so good! Loved it! Is there gonna be a sequel?
Fairykitty2010yahoo.com 2/3/09 . chapter 3
That was ery well written, and quite sad. I like it. It was extermely good, and I'd love to read it again and again.
icy thorns 12/24/08 . chapter 3
I love this! I keep coming back to it again and again. You are a really wonderful writer, absolutely nothing is awkward or ill-phrased, everything flows so beautifully. I really like House Dorthonion too, especially the way you echo moments from this one in the longer fic, like Tam telling Kiril he can't wait any longer. *sighs* Tamarack is ... really delicious. Kiril is wonderful too, but what can I say, I love Night Elf Druids!
Maginisha 12/2/08 . chapter 3
The decision between what feels good and what is the right thing to do...it is never easy. And you made a wonderful picture of it, you made the background story of the Sindorei come alive for me. I really enjoyed reading about it. (Normally Im an Alliance player and...no I do not like Blodelves at all.
This story was really amazing and I will perhaps read your other story as well. I am stil torn between your wonderful writing style and the fact that the story will of course be about blood elves all along.

But anyway this story was really worth adding to the favorites. Good job!
Maginisha 12/2/08 . chapter 2
Hey there!

Im an awfully lazy reviewer. I wanted to somment the rest of the story and then...I forgot. Sorry!

But now for the comment on his chapter.

The second part was definitely hot. Theres not much more to say about it. The language, the tension, the relief...everything was just amazing.

And the first part was good as well. Though I would have liked it to be even a little bit longer. I liked the way you wrote about the dream and a little more of it would have been nice.
Maginisha 11/11/08 . chapter 1
When I first discovered this story, I only skipped through it quite quickly, only reading a few passages here and there and then favourited it to read it elsewhen. But I could not resist very long.

But as it is getting late and I have to work early, I just leave a comment for the first chapter.

I really like how you decribe the druids way of dealing with nature. Makes me think about the druids in my own story, making them very poor and un-understanding compared to Tamarack.

Kiril on the other hand seems just like the selfish Sindorei brat you wanted him to look like. Very well written.

And I simply LOVED those dryads. Therere so...oh I dont know. Just dryadisch. _
The-Second.The-Fourth 11/8/08 . chapter 3
I have to say I enjoyed this story more than House Dothorion, I tend to ship one couple and then love them forever :P I am glad Kiril has his part in House dothorian, It would be interesting to learn of his transition from half-paladin to priest. Again, very well written, very keen to read more)
Metalmomma 11/6/08 . chapter 3
That story was amazing!
Mon 10/31/08 . chapter 3
Man, I've read your two fics and I have to say, I LOVE YOU. Your writing is awesome and stays true to the essence of both races. The language, the speech, everything! I am a TRUE FAN. A true fan of Tashin, Tavian, Kiril, Tamarack, Aeltha, Sorawen...you're awesome. I love how you make the male characters of the story prominent without downplaying the importance of the female characters in the story. Kudos, man. You're great. Keep writing!
Kuss von der Sonne 10/19/08 . chapter 2
Is it over? I hope not!

This story was so beautifully written both in the descriptions of the characters and the intense chemistry between them. In my opinion, you really captured the culture and sexyness of the Kaldorei.
But in all seriousness, the chemistry and dialogue was so well done. Please, PLEASE write more, I have been away from fanfic for many months and it was lovely to come back to it to a great story! :D *hugs-Sonne
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