That was ery well written, and quite sad. I like it. It was extermely good, and I'd love to read it again and again.

I love this! I keep coming back to it again and again. You are a really wonderful writer, absolutely nothing is awkward or ill-phrased, everything flows so beautifully. I really like House Dorthonion too, especially the way you echo moments from this one in the longer fic, like Tam telling Kiril he can't wait any longer. *sighs* Tamarack is ... really delicious. Kiril is wonderful too, but what can I say, I love Night Elf Druids!

The decision between what feels good and what is the right thing to do...it is never easy. And you made a wonderful picture of it, you made the background story of the Sindorei come alive for me. I really enjoyed reading about it. (Normally I´m an Alliance player and...no I do not like Blodelves at all.)

This story was really amazing and I will perhaps read your other story as well. I am stil torn between your wonderful writing style and the fact that the story will of course be about blood elves all along.

But anyway this story was really worth adding to the favorites. Good job!

Hey there!

I´m an awfully lazy reviewer. I wanted to somment the rest of the story and then...I forgot. Sorry!

But now for the comment on his chapter.
The second part was definitely hot. There´s not much more to say about it. The language, the tension, the relief...everything was just amazing.

And the first part was good as well. Though I would have liked it to be even a little bit longer. I liked the way you wrote about the dream and a little more of it would have been nice.

When I first discovered this story, I only skipped through it quite quickly, only reading a few passages here and there and then favourited it to read it elsewhen. But I could not resist very long.

But as it is getting late and I have to work early, I just leave a comment for the first chapter.

I really like how you decribe the druid´s way of dealing with nature. Makes me think about the druids in my own story, making them very poor and un-understanding compared to Tamarack.
Kiril on the other hand seems just like the selfish Sindorei brat you wanted him to look like. Very well written.

And I simply LOVED those dryads. There´re so...oh I don´t know. Just dryadisch. ^_^

I have to say I enjoyed this story more than House Dothorion, I tend to ship one couple and then love them forever :P I am glad Kiril has his part in House dothorian, It would be interesting to learn of his transition from half-paladin to priest. Again, very well written, very keen to read more :)

That story was amazing!

Man, I've read your two fics and I have to say, I LOVE YOU. Your writing is awesome and stays true to the essence of both races. The language, the speech, everything! I am a TRUE FAN. A true fan of Tashin, Tavian, Kiril, Tamarack, Aeltha, Sorawen...you're awesome. I love how you make the male characters of the story prominent without downplaying the importance of the female characters in the story. Kudos, man. You're great. Keep writing!

Is it over?! I hope not!

This story was so beautifully written both in the descriptions of the characters and the intense chemistry between them. In my opinion, you really captured the culture and sexyness of the Kaldorei. ^^

But in all seriousness, the chemistry and dialogue was so well done. Please, PLEASE write more, I have been away from fanfic for many months and it was lovely to come back to it to a great story! :D *hugs*

-Sonne

Ooh, great story :) I hope there is more and if so, good luck finishing it, I know it will be a great piece of work :)