So cute.

well written. good story..

LOVED IT!! but then again i love your other stories to. you have to qrite another one!

That was the perfect end to this story! I knew I loved Nohnny for a reason lol. Now I can't wait for A Great Fall!

So good! I absolutely love your Nohnny stories! I hope you either do a sequel or some one-shots for this one because the town's reaction could be interesting ... Especially the way you've written Lulu! Great work!

PLEASE don't let that be the end! I love Johnny and Nadine!

I loved this story!! I am sad that it is over but I am so looking forward to reading the next Johnny and Nadine story you put together. Great job!

what a perfectly sweet ending! I very much liked his musical take on everyone. They seemed spot on. And the music they made together read beautifully. My favorite part was how you described his urgency to compose. That's the feeling I get as a writer, both here and in my professional life. Well done!

that was so good i love Johnny Z. & Nadine C

wow that was a great story it is a shame it is over but at least it finished great. i hope i see more johnny and nadine stories from you because you write them so well. maybe even a sequal to this one lol anyways hope you start your next story soon.

i can't believe it's over *tear* i luved this chapter. every last bit of it. & that liine! genuus line 2 end it w/. thank u so much 4 giving us this story. it has been 1 of the best stories i've read of these 2 people. i started reading this couple not wanting 2 give them a chance but ur vision of them 2gether has me wanting 2 root 4 them :) i never thought i'd say that bout a couple i didn't originally like. & thank u 4 the promo/slideshow & the shout out. i'm so glad that u made it as well as riting this story & this couple. so thank u 1 more time. i can't wait 2 read 'a great fall' when u decide 2 post it as well as 'boys r like so totally dumb'. btw, i luv that title! k, i'l let u go now. hope the muse is keeping u busy w/ 'mean' as well as all ur other stories :) happy riting & have a good 1, take care huma :)

-erica

So Good!

LOVE LOVE your story Huma! I adore this couple!

nice chapter love how desperate johnny sounds on the voice message. hope he is able to fix his mess lol. update soon

once again i am blinded by ur billiance. & have a imentioned how much i adore ur claudie? who would have pegged her as the voice of reason? i luved the advice she gave johnny. & leyla was rite, he did sound sad. @ least as i was listening 2 the dialogue in my head. @ least liz asked her y 4 both reasons instead of trying 2 talk her in or out of going 2 c johnny. i think nadine did the rite thing in letting fate decided by flipping the silver dollar. i hope things turn around 4 her & johnny. hope the muse keeps u inspired & please update soon :)

-erica