That was cute. I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.

One thing, though: it's "dyeing", not "dying".

hat was really cool so simple yet entertaining hope to see more and thank you for putting in the littel part about the worrld being more open with bis/gays but thats a ideal world i think because i told my whole school i was bi and now half of them hate me and are mean (note i'm saying this in a calm tone) but anyway yay for fanfiction

Considering that you wrote this in class, I'd still say you did a damn good job. ^^ It was sweet and simple, pretty cute. Perhaps there was a little too much seriousness, but I wouldn't really say it was overdone. Poor Kagami's always so stressed out about her feelings.

I look forward to seeing the second half of this. And so what if someone calls you a lesbian. Lesbians have more fun. :P Keep up the good work. (Oh, and the first line is repeated twice. You might wanna fix that.)

You achaly went with Blueberry Muffins? I was kidding when I sugested it...

I love konakaga, and yeah if anybody knew I loved yuri, I would expect people to call me lebian too. :p Though, I would like to be called that as odd as it seems. I think it adds on to me being more bad ass. Keep up the awesome work! Update soon! I'm looking forward to it.