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HarbringerLady
2009-08-13 . chapter 51
a question? Where do you put the wedding ring on? Left hand or right hand? When I was a kid, I'm quite sure that my mom told me it was put on the left, but when I was an adult she was adamant to say that she told me the wedding ring was in the right hand. So which one? or is it different for different countries?
SierralaineWalsh
2009-05-08 . chapter 60
THE END!? No~ I really, really love this fic! It's just so cute - I just can't get enough of Seth and Eirika. I just love your fics! I do hope you write a new one soon, about Seth and Eirika of course! Great job in this story, by the way! :)
Lupi Loop
2009-05-04 . chapter 60
As always with your work that was really lovely! I really enjoyed it, so thanks for the entertainment!!
Trevor X
2009-05-03 . chapter 60
Ya finished it! *considers dancing around the room*

*decides NOT to dance, on account of the many obstacles that would invariably trip the feet*

*besides which, he can't dance... or something to that effect*

Sixty bite size moments of pure Seth and Eirika goodness, with random other flavors. What's not to smile about?
Midnight Feathers
2009-05-02 . chapter 60
Aw, it's nice to see a happy conclusion for the couple. And now Seth will have Eirika there with them if he has nightmares again, aww. :D

Thanks so much for sharing these! I really enjoyed reading them, and I can't wait to see what else you write!
Starlight Lady
2009-05-01 . chapter 60
Absolutely lovely dear! I really loved the Heart chapter. :D And your ending was perfect, simple, and very fitting. ^^

~Starlight
Darkide
2009-05-01 . chapter 60
It's nice to read a story that is popular that you don't have to review to encourage, and that's so well written that any kind of advice you could give makes you sound like a bigger idiot then you already are... Shame this ain't a story like that lol. Sorry, couldn't resist.

Well I've said it before (long time ago but) this is a great story. Even with it being a modern AU story (which almost always = bad). It was very funny in parts, overly sweet in others, and just a wonderful story... all in neat little drabbles/babblings/whatever’s lol.

The characters were excellently fleshed out, the connectivity of the different prompts was solid, and the intrigue you managed to pack in such short chapters was amazing.

As always though, I'm happy yet sad when a great fic comes to a close. And although I didn't review hardly at all (for above reasons) I really enjoyed this story.

Well that's about much praise as I can stomach, and we'd hate for you to get too big of a head. So I will look forward to any future endeavors you have... which is fancy talk for I can't wait for more fics! Till then, laters!

You can't kill a man with a 3-cylinder car... You can't I've tried, it's impossible. (Comic Taylor Mason)
TheTwilightRurouni
2009-05-01 . chapter 60
Smiles and laughter abound in this story. This was probably the best SethXEirika I've read thus far, and I'm having a hard time imagining what could unseat it. Aside from the serious chapters, all others made me smile, usually downright giddy. The way you characterize everyone, pull them into the real world, is perfect. I wouldn't imagine them any other way, and often I read and wonder how you do it. Besides the occasional typo you seem to write each chapter so perfectly. I can remember finding this and thinking what the heck, I'll see what it's all about. I'm happy I did, and stayed on for the entire ride. Perhaps my reviews are short, and often times say nothing more than how wide a chapter stretched my grin, but I hope my reviews let you know how much I liked this. Thank you so much for posting, I haven't read many authors who finish their work and I'm pleased this was one of them. Best of luck in all your endeavors,

Twilight Rurouni
TheTwilightRurouni
2009-05-01 . chapter 59
I...I don't get it. Darn. But I'm not afriad to confront my ignorance, please enlighten me. Why did he call her Ms. King? A joke of some sort? I thought if anything he would emphasize her new status as /Mrs./ Knightley. Aside from my hopeless confusion, great chapter.

Twilight Rurouni
TheTwilightRurouni
2009-05-01 . chapter 58
You always end your chapters with such memorable lines, I tend to focus in those. But I also liked the bit about Seth's body remembering, in spite of the effort he puts into forgetting it. Just another reminder he's human.

Twilight Rurouni
saffiremoon21
2009-05-01 . chapter 60
Yes, you're the one that writes stories with nice endings...I'm mean and kill people off!

I love you!
saffiremoon21
2009-05-01 . chapter 59
lol pool innuendo.

sticks...balls...how can it not be innuendo? XD

I still don't understand pool anyway...
saffiremoon21
2009-05-01 . chapter 58
aw. Poor Seth. Lucky Eirika XD
TheTwilightRurouni
2009-04-29 . chapter 57
Mhm...yes, I remember that chapter from Seven. And yet, all that comes to mind specifically is Ephraim emphatically stating that "No one's getting laid on THIS vacation." And Eirika, what are we going to do with her, she's a devious one. Thank goodness they're married now, Seth can relax a little-oh wait. He never relaxes, never mind! Anyway, nice chapter, I'm going to hate it when this comes to an end.

Twilight Rurouni
TheTwilightRurouni
2009-04-29 . chapter 56
"He tilts his head and stares at the amber fluid, his hands around the glass. I have to stifle a laugh– he looks as if he were pondering the meaning of life, or something of similar gravity, rather than a question about how good his rum is."

Lines like this tickle me, they're just so amusing. Other than the laughs though, this chapter was calming, unexpectedly so. I suppose it was the way Eirika described dancing, it made it seem much more peaceful than all the lights and sounds it really is. And who knew she liked to dance?

Twilight Rurouni
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