 ribbons-paws 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Aw... You've rendered me speechless. I applaud you. |
 memepungu 2008-11-22 . chapter 1aw |
 All I Want 4 My Bday Is Ikuto 2008-11-03 . chapter 1So beautiful.. refers to title |
 MyKindOfBeautiful 2008-10-12 . chapter 1** hate it when something so amazingly great has to end. It's...upsetting.
Speaking of upsetting issues, promise me you'll never delete anything you ever wrote and posted up here on or whatever, okay?
I DON'T APPRECIATE PEOPLE WHO DON'T KEEP THEIR PROMISES.
(:
But this, this is romantic. I just wish there would be a guy out there like Sasuke. A guy that doesn't constantly need to talk every second of his life, you know?
(I'm thinkin' I need an anti-social cupcake. Yeahh.)
Stay Beautiful is a great song. |
 Alice.The.Demented. 2008-10-12 . chapter 1I love how you do that! It's like you make a story that talks about another story! You know that 'but that's another story' they always talk about. Well this is like that! Only better! Like the story that has the other another story in it! (...Am I confusing you, because if I keep talking for much longer, I'll be very confused myself) And I love how you do those Capital letters! 'The End' 'The Impossible''Somewhere Else'. I think you really are a fairy. Care to explain?
Write On!
Alice |
 ish.the.abstract 2008-10-12 . chapter 1great job as always |
 sasusaku779 2008-10-11 . chapter 1oh sniffle sniffle! i think im going to cry... hang on while i go grab my box of tissues!!
sad and hapy at once! |
 Animecherryblossem33 2008-10-11 . chapter 1that was cute! i liked it! |
 frumpyrox 2008-10-11 . chapter 1again, supr dupr cute, the hand-ovr-heart was so unbelievably sigh-im-in-luv-with-this-n-really-need-a-life-ish. only ur fics cud make me feel tht way.
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...omg, tht was the corniest thing i think iv evr sed. or typd. watevrr.
happy unbirthday
--frumpyrox |
 iMissa 2008-10-11 . chapter 1AND THEN SASUKE TRANSFERRED TO SAKURA'S SCHOOL BECAUSE HE COULDN'T STAND TO BE WITHOUT HER AND LATER ON THEY GOT MARRIED AND THERE WAS SEXY TIME AND THEY HAD HOT, HOT BABIES.
That's the REAL ending, duh.
This was so sad but so, so amazing and perfect and - and -
-gestures around wildly and flails spastically-
I LOVE IT, AND THIS LINE WAS LOVE:
Instead, he answered her question by taking her hand, and placing it over his chest—his heart.
HEE.
I LOVE IT (and you, like duh?) JULIA. |
 sixpacksofcigarettes 2008-10-11 . chapter 1that was amazing. especially what sasuke did - taking her hand and placing it over his heart. totally unexpected. really good story telling. i absolutely luv it! |
 charredfeathers 2008-10-10 . chapter 1Beautiful. Right up to the very end, it was. It's a story that touches the heart...
Thanks for sharing! |
 Itachirules.org 2008-10-10 . chapter 1OMG THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I loved it!! |
 Innocence and Instinct 2008-10-10 . chapter 1sweet story |
 candyluver 2008-10-10 . chapter 1This is really good! Abit sad, but then sweet...it's like one of those cheesy romance movies...but better! ^^ Lol. |