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Reviews for: First Time Pam sees Jim naked
2honest4myowngood
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
this was a good fic. i like the comedy in it and how it wasn't total fluff.
Lundsey
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
Everyone has said it, but the last line was just so perfect. You really wrote Jim and Pam amazingly well. I hope to see more of your fics... especially JAMMER ones!
Sarah
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
Okay, you HAVE to carry on, this is SO good. I can't believe how much I loved reading this. I've already read it like three times, and the last line still kills me. Please write more.
Adam Osmond
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
AWESOME! I really want this to carry on write more :-D
pambeesly
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
This is amazing. I read it last night and liked it so much that I just read it again. I agre with the others - the last line was beyond perfect. Write more!
ThisIsPam
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
Wow, you're a really great writer. I loved every minute of that fic. The last line killed me. The way he said I'm so in love with you, not just I love you... amazing. Please say you'll write more. I'd love to see you write a series of these!!
officejam
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
aww oh my god this was the sweetest thing! that last line just made me feel so happy. i loved this whole story. you should definitely make a "firsts" series. such as...
the first time pam told jim she loved him.
i would say more but my mind has drawn blank! anyway, you're an amazing writer and should definitely keep doing this. great job=]
bingbangboom714
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
Wowza. It sounds like they're having fun.
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