Dude. How emo T.T Reliving Dei's death is just awful. Yin dying too makes it worse. T.T Good job with it, even if it is horribly sad XP
Wonderful story ^.^ I don't usually like a lot of OC/Canon pairings but this one was done rather well -Smiles.- Very very nice! Five stars!

I liked the battle scenes, they were good! Better than any I could do lol. I didn't really follow them though, because I don't understand fights. Lol. Total pacifist XP

Evil was kind of funny. Horribly witchy XP She was interesting lol. Love the name Kira for her son XP

It made me sad that Deidara never mentioned Sasori. T.T So emo lol. No one loves my poor Sasori no Danna -Huggles plushie.-

Forgive me, I must give constructive criticism now. Please don't hate me @.@
I thought it was a little too short. I wish I could have seen more of the in-between time, more of their relationship progressing. Because of length of the story, it was a tad jumpy.

All in all a very good fic, especially for your only Naruto one! You should write some more -Hearts!-

Loves,
CG

Lmao. Yin loving Hidan. -That- is a scary thought XP
Poor Hidan, he didn't need to die...or lose his head. Whichever.
Well I guess he kinda did since he killed poor Asuma...T.T But still. I like Hidan lol
That's right DeiDei, those thoughts are good XP Well. They're better than "that stupid fugly witch is impossible un!" XP

Uwah! I'm liking this so far -Grins.- Gotta love DeiDei with an attitude XP Tobi is adorable, as always.

DUN DUN DUN :o Omg is it over? T_T

Sugoi ne! I love how Yin and Deidara are so similar yet so different! They made such a kawaii couple ne! :)