It's so cool to see a real insane Curly :) I'm so tired of the pandemic of OCC'ness and Cliché'ness that struck the fandom... Great chapters: fresh and intriguing approach to the characters we love.

I am so intrigued by Curly's story. Why do I get the feeling that his parents shipped him off to the funny farm, and have no idea that he's back, and hiding in their house.

Update.

Curly is going from 'funny crazy' to dangerous one.

Keep the good writing.

I think Curly is sorta of a stalker the way he goes after Lila. I'm glad that Arnold protects Lila from Curly he is just a little to possessive of her.

o_O

I am gonna figure out this Curly enigman if it KILLS ME!

And something's up with Lila and Curly. Why is he after her? What does she know? How does it all fit?

You're doing quite a good job at making me think, as of late. Bravo chapter. I'm loving it so far.

-Pointy

- Curly seems like quite the creeper.

- The line, "She gave a quick wave to anyone who would return it (Arnold preferably), which was not noticed nor returned." - made me cry on the inside. I felt bad for Helga.

- Olga is too funny.

Great chapter.

Heh, Curly is a walking hormone.

Keep the good writing.

Lila is a little controling to me, I think it's nice that Helga and Olga actually spend time together even with Helga didn't want to.

Yay! You're back!

Okay, now I'm really suspicious about Curl-Thaddeus. What's his deal? I' kind of feeling like Helga right now; I feel bad that Lila needs to pressure Arnold into protecting her, but it sounds like she might be using him just a smidge.

I like how this is unfolding so far. Great dialogue and attention to details. Can't wait for more.

-Pointy_Objects

Love it!!
But i'l love it more if you update it... please?

♥Forevermusicfairy♥

Very good one; short yet cool. The flashbacks/thoughts were a nice detail.

Keep the good writing.

really good chapter, I liked the flashback scene the most that Arnold's parents were there and how Arnold couldn't sing it, but his grandpa sang quietly anf grandma just clapped for the melody...
Curly, huh...Well let's see would Arnold protect her or not!
Looking foward to your next chapter

WAIT A MINUTE!

I just thought of something...is Lila asking Arnold to protect her because Curly is in her dance class? I mean, in canon, he is a dancer, and he may be crazy enough to like, attack her in class!

Just a thought.

And this has nothign to do with chapter one, but you know how the site is about reviewing twice to the same chapter...

-Pointy_Objects

Oh, I smell what you're steppin' in! Not only is Lila trying to keep Arnold from Helga, but she feels...let's say vulernable and scared without him..becasue of Curly! But why? Was he serious about his threat? What about Rhonda?

Oh, you are good.

Arnold quit running from Helga...literally and figuratively. It's only serving to make you crazy. You handled Arnold's emotions really well in this. Fantastic.

Great job with this, really. I feel like each new chapter really is an awakening. Very nice job.

-Pointy_Objects

Lila seemed to come off a bit insensitive during this... or it could be just me.

I mean, Arnold was still reeling from the shock of realizing that this was were his parents were declared dead, and she shoots him stern glances, and then she has the nerve to ask him to the dance studio...at first i thought her invite was to help cheer him up, but then she thinks "protect me from curly"...Seriously?!...

I'm just suprised Arnold immediately began to think about Helga.

Anyways, this was an insightful chapters.