Wow... I really love this story of yours! It is a very original retelling of a romantic fairy tale.

nice...not a bad chapter. That was a very good idea with the finches. I like it. A mistake has however snuck in in your beautiful tale, you have written babe instead of baby. But that's about it. I'm very curious to see what happends next. Keep up the good work. ;)

Sakujun has honor and tried to stop this from happening?! Very cool, even if he is planning on buring down the tower. Oh, I just love the way this is all working out - in all its little twists and turns. And I love the consistency with other SM tales and series. Thank you so much!

I really really love this story! You are very good at writing!! My favourite copule is Kouyuu and Shuuei, I think that your idea that Kouyuu would have been fomr the Hyou clan is interesting! I am looking forward to the next chapter! ^^

that was really lovely, though I felt it was somewhat like Sleeping beauty in later part...still, do update soon!

ah Sakujun ya crazy bastard... I love ya :D

Awesome story.. I had read it in bits and parts but I actually sat down and read it all today and I loved it.

Some parts had me rolling with laughter. And I'm so glad that so many characters who've only been mentioned in the anime/novels and a bit more character in your story.

Hakuyuu needs a hug :D

wow...quick up-date, nice nice very nice. Now, to the story.Intriguing ideea to multiply Kouyuu. The part with the Ran triplets being spanked was very entertaining ;)..and Shuuei being able to cross that river also reminds me of a fairy tail from my own country. Lol. Very well written. Hope of reading the next chapter very soon. Keep up the good work ;)

This story is just getting better and better. Now, I am racking my brain to remember which fairy tale had three seemingly alike beauties while only one was real.

Please keep up the grand work. You write wonderfully well.

wow...this sounds really thrilling and most of all captivating !! And also...it appears to be very familiar...in the direction of sleeping beauty and another fairytail that is near to my heart. Very well written. I eagerly await the next chapters.Please continue. ;)

i got goosebumps. Very nice. I'm very curious to see what happends next. I hope Shuuei and Koyuu meet in the next chapter. I'm so eager to see how they react to eachother. This story has been up till now one of the best I've read. Please keep up the good work. Some very well written stories are overlooked..and that's a foolish shame...and some awful skteches..get a humounges number of reviews...such idiotic things happen...but i doubt your story will remained unnoticed. It's far to good to be overlooked.

The story was very very entertaining and very well written. I also like the "team work" between Shuurei and Shoukun. And the part with Shou Taifu was hillarious as well. Very very good.

this was hillarious. I really love the relationship between our dear lovebirds. And I also adore the fact that you kept Shoukun alive..and that all families are complete. I really love that. Also, Kouyuu being a "mage" is an appealing idea, that i'm inclined to accept with great excitement. Please continue

a brilliant idea...a wedding..love letters...how romantic! I love the idea. Thank you for not making it sickly perverted or too direct. I really love it. It really does sound like a fairytail. :)

ah, how cute...shuuei is smitten. I love it. And Kouyuu is very good portrayed. I really really like this. Again, brilliant work

an extremely interesting beginning. At first i was a little confused about the characters and the actual plotline...but it is really really interesting please keep up the marvelous work. I love your writing style