I liked the ending. well done, good story

THE END!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!? NO... pleze? =]


ok though, it was seriously a good story!

OKAY...slightly confused but a good chapter nontheless.

So Edward bit Bella when he attacked her in ch.10.
Okay, that would explain some things in this chapter.
Does that mean they just live happily ever after?
This cannot be the ending though? I hope it isn't.
Eitherway, Bella seems to be happy with Edward, despite what he did. Also, I liked what Edward said, to Bella in end.
"No more bloodlust." It was amusing to read.

WOAH! Talk about intense.

At least, Edward was able to save Bella from the other vampire. Question is though, will he be able to save her from himself? Especially, since he seems to be attracted to her blood.

im really kinda diggin this one. =] good job hun!

Good chapter!

Got to feel bad for Jasper! It sucks to have his power on some occassions. Especially, like having to deal with hysterical humans. Though, what Jasper said to Bella, about sensitive hearing and her not being the best singer around was kind of funny to read. At least, Bella's relaxed a bit now and it sounds like Edward is going to take her somewhere.

Can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Until then.

i like your story its really good, i hope that you will continue the story.

Good chapter!

Can't blame Bella for being worried about dinner with Edward's family. Especially, since Rosalie will be there and isn't exactly fond of Bella to begin with. Hopefully, Rosalie will be on her best behaviour or at least, be absent when Bella's there. Because I seriously doubt that Edward wants Rosalie to start something that'll end up hurting Bella. I'm quite sure that little get-together will be interesting to read about.
Therefore, looking forward to more. Until then

brilliant.

continue

Well done.

ah! sweet!

Great chapter!

Well it sounds like Bella took the news of Edward being a vampire really well. I'm sure Edward is thrilled to know that he didn't scare Bella off with his secret.

Can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Until then.

YAY!

Great chapter!

Thankfully, Edward hasn't done anything bad to Bella yet. Instead, he just kissed her, which is a good move to make.
Especially, since Edward has told Bella the truth about him being a vampire. Can't wait to find out what her reaction to it that piece of news will be like. Therefore, looking forward to more. Until then.

OMG!

How could leave it like this? What is Edward going to do next? Is he going to kiss Bella? Or will he give into his bloodlust and bit her?

I'm in total suspense of what'll happen next.
Definitely looking forward to more. Until then.