*sobbing hysterically* buthedied! very sad *sniffle* very well written *sniffle* anyway, like i said very well written and i liked it *sniffle*

Nice story! I liked it!

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Go to this link please!

PS: I'm in the SWAT Kats forums. My name there is Yusuke30! Look at the email to see!

I'm still kinda sad right now. I hate it when James dies...(even though I've done it in my own fics before) it's still depressing. But anyway, for your 1st fic, I think it was great. Maybe a little brutal with the whole charred flesh, one eyeball thing, but still a good fic. I like the title too. Keep writing)

Very sweet. It was good enough indeed! I didn't know what to expect at first, but I guess checking out pays off! A very delightful experience!

Aw... Cute first fic! _

*Jaw Drops* Are you sure that this is your frist Pokémon fic? It's so... So... Sweet, and sad, all at once. *smiles* Keep up the good work! Stancy McKatt