as expected your writing almost noked my sit again thaks for writing it seems like you rewrote the story please man hopefully the other you do finish it i'm gonna get till the end of this one and in a coupple of weeks i'll check the other i want to see other people's writing (i sound like a big critik or something)

ok dude once again the figthing is your stong accet, the figth against the angel was but the relationship with shinji and asuka i don't know. don't you think you where rushing to much, ok well see.

dude the figth was great! i love the way the story is going, can't wait to read the next.

so far so good, the way you decribe asuka's personallity is great, also rei changing her and making her adknowlage the fact that she doesn't know anythig about the last rei that great too.

i don't misato's o shinjis personallity to changed from other fics but they to me at sound good.

the only thing i have to say is that sometimes you sound like your five i don't know make it sound a little more mature but peaple don't make it with long words that in the end just make your stories borring.

keep up the good work

[i take my hat off] dude thanks i was beggining to lose fate in the writers here but you proved me wrong so far (even doo is onle the first chapter) is one of the best fics the story is great i expecting a lot hoppefully your story can deliver.

i once wrote a story but my grammar and spelling made me stop i just couldn't put into letter what i wanted but went i read stuff like this the ideas star flowing again

This is the best fanfic of evangelion ever written, the story is excellent and your characters are absolutely InCharacter and still they have a touch very special that is like a growth beyond of the original story, maybe you gave them a little more of heart. I am impressed for your work, really Sadamoto couldnt write a plot like this and his manga selled 26 millions of copies since 1997 without finish it XD

Update soon and great story _

when you update it i will read it still if it take a few years still I hope it will be more soon.

If you need encouragement, that I can give. As for real motivation, that itself is harder. Do you have ideas on how to take the story further?

Wow. Hard to believe this story is still alive after all these years. It's a good piece of fiction, with enough character development and interesting little plot twists. Good luck finishing it, and hope you find an ending you're satisfied with.

Everything is moving along nicely. Excellent character development as always, though no Gendo Ikari or Kozou Fuyutsuki development this time around. I've stated many times I think this fic is brilliant and will therefore stick around to see it to its end. As an aside, it would be good if you included the 10th chapter 'Canon' in it's a wonderful piece even if it's an interlude.
I am hopeful there will be some development of the relationship between Gendo and Shinji, it was an important relationship in the anime yet the two of them have not even had a conversation in your story. It is a point I have been insisting on since I began reviewing a very long time ago. I do understand that you may not see the point of it, but I do believe a good argument can be made as to how essential it is to the eva verse for those two to have resolution.
In general I must again state that the development of the relationship between Shinji and Asuka leaves me in awe, it is fantastic that you have taken a suitable amount of time and pages to develop their characters and relationship believably. I find the attention you devote to detail commendable and will be hoping for the next chapter eagerly. Regards! If you need a beta reader, don't hesitate to ask -

Very good fic Rommel, i read all the chapters in two days and i like all of them. I like a lot how you are doing the relation of Asuka and Shinji.

Ominous...

just when the Children are finding some level of happiness, the S**T will hit the fan!

Oh how very Eva-like!
dennisud

very good charecter development with Asuka i also like the green tablet hmm so is the green tablet asuka's old persona? or is the computer simply trying to twist the piolt into it's will? is the tablet evil or is is benovelent? yes i do know i suck at spelling too lazy to spell check my words meh whatever.

still good job on the chapter and i hope to see good work in the future...that being soon...hopefully "puppy dog eyes of doom-movin

aw so cute the messed up kids finally show their warm and fuzzy feelings. makes me want to squeeze a field of weasels till their spines break. oh and good work -movin

It's been a while since a read anything in but it was definetely worthwhile to check the site again. I did not think I would ever get to read another chapter of evangelion:genocide and had begun regarding it as one amongh those pieces of great fiction which would remain unfinished. I am extremely glad to see that you haven't given up on this story, since its a pretty darn good story. It's amazing that after more than two years you were able to get a new chapter out in which there is no noticeable switch of storytelling style. It's all great and good. There wasn't any deep or poignant Fuyutsiki-Ikari conversation in this one, but there was plenty of character development, action and romance. The tactful handling of the Shinji-Asuka relationship is always a plus in this story. Theirs is not a fairy tale, and they are both pretty complex and trouble characters and their relationship should reflect this: difficult, sometimes angsty, yet intense and passionate. I very much enjoy the pacing of your storytelling, there is no point in ruining good plot and characters by quickly resolving situations without exploring the complexities of the human psyche or the political and technological sides of the story. This allows for great dialogue and in-depth character development. I haven't yet seen an example of a Deus ex Machina to solve any difficult plot point, and for this congratulations, too many a fic-writer tends to introduce such devices at late stages of their stories out of lazyness of through the lack of any good ideas for resolving plot-points. This story is fantastic. Hopefully it will not be too long before we can read the next chapter. Good luck and keep up the goodness.

Wow! Great story! Please update this more often. I beg of you! It has been executed up till thus point in an amazing fashion. The characters have been kept in check with great effort, I can tell. And the relationship is moving along a bit at a time. _ Awesome. Keep it up!