*chuckles* Little does our Moony know, all his "research" is right here, online, totally free, and occasionally involving Remus himself...

You know whats sad, I can totaly see this happening. I realy need to lay off the fanfiction. But I don't think I will, it's all too good.

*laughing* that was great!! Loved the part at the end with the “Gonna try sooner than that, then?” XD

this was really good. I love how it goes from all the hilarity with Remus & Sirius to the seriousness (haha, bad pun) at James's house. I feel bad that Remus had no idea what Sirius really thought. But it was a really good little story. I love your stories. They're always straight to the point and funny. Brilliant.
I can totally see Remus writing trashy romances. :D
Zellahxx

One more chapter? =) This fic was goodie goodie

haha you should write an awkward get together between moony and padfoot.
lol
that is something i want to read.
haha

This was really funny, I enjoyed it very much! You know what I would enjoy even more though? If there were more chapters coming :) Really, if you have ideas for a continuation, that would be great, because I loved this oneshot/potential-first-chapter! They were all very in character and it flowed nicely. Well written!
I also love it when writers include extremely minor characters like Marlene McKinnon. So thumbs up for you! :D
-D0nQuix0te

there will be more right? It's sweet and funny, I really hope you continue this story.

hi, i liked your story very much, but at the end i had to scroll up to confirm, that this is a complete story...

...it left me asking for more (btw, cute one-shot)...

(how about a sequel wit a bigger plot? ;))

Oh, I wish it could have been like this...

"You know how I get at funerals. It was after the wake of the Prewitt brothers, and you know, everyone was drinking, and there she was, all sympathetic, and well, things got a bit out of hand. Talk about a disaster…"

So, naughty Moony, you get your jollies at funeral uh?

;D

Another great fic by your pen, hon. Keep writing, will you?

Cheers,

Sophia

Oh my. Sirius was suspecting Remus to be the spy because he was secretly writing bad romance novels? That would've been REALLY tragic. Great idea! My favourite part was the description of the books' covers and what Sirius read aloud. But that makes one also a bit sad, knowing that there actually are such horrible books.
I loved that Sirius ran immediately to James to tell him. Sounds a lot like them.

You can't just leave it like that! Unresolved! Unfinished! Although I did love it immensely. Poor Remus. I bet he secretly enjoys it. :p

It has been too long! I missed you! -HUG-
This is such a marvelous one-shot! I absolutely love it! (I'm so happy that I keep on using exclamation marks all the time)
I can see Sirius' attitude so very clearly is my imagination... I must say, the picture I see is quite alluring... But then again, when is Sirius not alluring? -wink- This is really Sirius! haha and Remus writing romance novels! YAY
You balance the angsty atmosphere of war time perfectly with the more amusing things that happen in every day life. I feel like this could've happened for real.
Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it very much!
Lhune

That was really cute. Too bad it didnt really happen that way. It would be interesting if you decided to continue this *looks hopeful*

I love the resolution that you've chosen! We know what happens in JK Rowling's books but if the reader choses, she can imagine an AU ending.
I found this paragraph particularly satisfying:
As he shared an amused look with James, Sirius realized that a part of him was finally starting to relax after so long. Ever since he had first started noticing Remus’ suspicious behavior, Sirius had begun to hurt, and it wasn’t completely bound to worries about the war. The idea that Remus might want to hide something important from him was as soul-shattering as anything else he could imagine. Sirius wasn’t certain if he would ever talk to Remus about his feelings, but at least now he was once again assured that things between them would never erode; they would always trust and care for each other.