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Reviews for: Unending Love
acer-sigma
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
Nice morning after scene for that scene in 'Unending'! Definitely think they would have had to talk about Daniel's rant the previous night, and you did a good job of explaining the issues that have been associated with both Daniel and Vala.

Plus, the little bit about the Prometheous meeting was a nice touch.
FlaWolfDog
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
I liked the new perspective you put into the morning after between Vala and Daniel. And, that little wave back to Daniel as Vala left his cabin has to me always been like a signature Vala moment. Thanks for writing.
macisgate
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
Loved it! Nicely done.
HAZMOT
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
This was nice. Finally that ill forgotten scene and the words that had to be spoken about both their insecurities. It had to come up between the sheets and this was a very intelligent way to give a finality that it should of been viewed in the first place. Nice, and very well expressed. :D
CaramelMonkey
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
It's nice Daniel finally knows that Vala's not messing with him. About time anyway. lol. Nice! xD
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