Aww. This was so lovely. I was hoping someone would make a better love scene than in the book. This is incredible really. I'm so glad I found this. Amazing.

Love it. Its good to hear in Edward's perspective.

Just as fabulous as the first chapter.

Oh. My. Word. Edward certainly has a way with words, doesn't he? That was wonderful, beautiful, amazing, fantastic...

Vixen

Wonderfully written! Full of lots of emotions. But mostly the love that they have for each other!

Cory

OMG VIXEN YOU ARE AMAZING YOUR WRITING IS SO DETAILED AND ENTHRALLING YOU ARE EVEN BETTER THAN STEPHENIE MEYER!

So beautiful! Like Midnight Sun was picked up at Isle Esme! Thanks for writing this.

Wow that was an amazing portrayal of Edward. I lost myself in it that was just ammazing.

You. Are. My. Hero. Seriously, this is the best fanfic I've read regarding Isle Esme. You maintain Edward's voice and are somehow able to still treat a very, ahem, graphic experience into something pure and lovely. You should be published.

amazing

very will written

seriously, this should be on SM's website as the outtake!

Now why couldn't this be in the book? *fans self*

I just re-read this. My all-time favorite!

Part Two was amazing. It was incredibly written. You are wonderful. Your writing is tremendous. You really should think about writing your own novel. You were able to draw out Edward's emotions on both the pleasurable side as well as his self disgust. Anyone who has read Breaking Dawn the following morning after this night, who doesn't want to scream at Edward for his stupidity about Bella's feelings. Granted the thought that he thinks he hurt it seriously, but she can't even remember being in pain. But that makes the story flow, I guess. Great work. keep it up I hope to read further stories from you.