Awsome!YEAH!^-^ Love Tala's comparing himself to Kai but it still makes me sad to read about him critizing himself so poorly; I love you, Tala! You're cool, too, Kai. But I'm all for the Demolition BOys! Whoo! Kinda disappointed there's no Bryan, Ian and Spencer but it's still really great.

Anyway, in short, I really enjoyed the pros and cons of being a Beyblade superstar, the Fan-Girls Obsessing-ness, Kai's impatience, Tala's obliviousness and they're cute, protectiveness and sweet bet. Really great job, seriously. And, eventhough I'm a huge fan of the DBz, I don't think I'd go as far or as insane as those fangirls; geez, get a grip, sychos!>-< Love it. Can't wait for more; maybe something about the other members? Bye^-^

This is pretty good as well. I love the interaction between Kai and Tala. They both have a sweet tooth. :snickers: And I love the analysis Tala has made for himself and then the ending where the girls just fall all over each other, since they died. XD Anyway, love this!

Gosh, the last three lines are so touching, especially the last! Great story.

Heya Mika here, that was a really great one-shot. I really enjoyed it and thought that it was cute. XXMikaXX

aw i liked that! poor tala thought he was ugly when actually he isn't. i like tala's eyes actually there pretty! nice light blue my fav colour!

aww that's sweet, i refer Tala over Kai any dya, so cute

EXCELLENT