 Meg 2009-05-21 . chapter 5 Great fic, so far. I'm really enjoying the story. Please update soon! :) |
 rovingquestion 2009-05-04 . chapter 5 This? Is awesome. Great story, and I am in awe of how you've managed to capture all of their voices. More? Please? With a cherry on top, even. |
 Niece of the Prophet Zarquon 2009-05-04 . chapter 5Wonderful fight scene, the shoe idea was freaking genius as was the whole thing with the hose. |
 Sparks Diamond 2009-03-30 . chapter 4Awesome chappie! Update soon! |
 Niece of the Prophet Zarquon 2009-03-29 . chapter 4Love the new chapter I think you've got Andi's reaction to the whole fatherhood secret exactly right although she will be ** when she finds out Sam's been lieing to her she won't care about what.
I was thinking about your comment at the start of chapter 4, to me it is great that the new season is taking the story in directions I wouldn't have guessed. This way we have the fun of thinking up our own ideas and get to see others that are even more awesome.
And if our ideas are completly utterly wrong we can always type them up anyway and call them AU. |
 catko 2009-03-29 . chapter 4I'm so glad you're back to this story because I've been waiting to see what will happen next. I'm really loving the hot/cold theme. Excellent interplay among the characters.
Suspense is building. Hope we don't have to wait as long for Chapter 5! |
 Sparks Diamond 2009-03-19 . chapter 3Awesome! I love it! Update soon! |
 cirana 2008-11-02 . chapter 3 gd fic |
 6StringSamurai13 2008-10-16 . chapter 3Another awesome chapter! Great job on the scene with the escaped soul, great action. Loved the talk between Ben and Sam and Sock's little outburst was perfect. Again, you're doing a great job keeping the feel of the series in tact with your story. Keep up th egood work, I can't wait till the next chapter! |
 Kali-Nineteen 2008-10-15 . chapter 3So Sam may also have the ability of teleportation. Although if Sam is the Devil's son, and the Devil isn't just moving things around him and and transporting him places without showing up to manipulate him and the now "good" demons, he would probably inherit more than just telekinesis. Anyway, good job so far, and please keep up-dating! |
 Reaper-Maniac 2008-10-15 . chapter 3wowoowowowow!update soon!
I loved it!
this is my favoite one of all your stories so far. They get better and better each time you write!!
so don't stop writing! |
 pacejunkie 2008-10-15 . chapter 3My favourite dialogue:
Sam was silent for a moment before quietly saying, "I'm going to Hell, Ben."
"Then maybe, Sam, that's all the more reason for you to grab Heaven while you're still on Earth."
That was sweet. I loved the action in this and you got the coolest soul ever there in butcher ice man. |
 pacejunkie 2008-10-12 . chapter 2SQUE! THIS IS AWESOME! Now we're getting into the meat of the story (see what I did there?). I love the Sam/Andi conflict and their scenes together, I can see why Sam would be torn and I also think the Devil is partly right. Excellent dialogue you've written here and the characterization of the Devil was perfect. He always manages to push the right buttons. This would make a great episode. I can't wait to see where this goes. |
 catko 2008-10-11 . chapter 1Love the thread of Sam being hot (and how!), the dilemma of moving in together, and as always, your Sam and Devil interactions. And here you're showing a real touch for Sam and Andi, too. Now you can really interweave the sweet and romantic with the ominous. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 6StringSamurai13 2008-10-11 . chapter 1HRM...cute first chapter. Good job on capturing the feel and camaraderie between the boys. I can't help but wonder how Andi's mom is going to take things. Anyway, can't wait to see where this story goes, it has a good start! |