PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! I love it SO MUCH! Please just finish it and I'll be REALLY REALLY HAPPY! LOL! I have yet to write an x-men but I probably will because you just encouraged me! I am adding you and your story to my fav.s list!

*cough* Logan had brown eyes. *cough* used the word fowl man to much. *cough* I hate mary-sues but this one is ok.

Hey, why do you and Wolvy fall in love!
He is mine!,
nah just kidding!
I know how you feel, he is soo handsome and cute!
UPDATE SOON!

This was an ok first chapter but its sounds to much like the begining of the x-men movie.

I say this for taking out the golden sun fic Twilight something: FU

I realy enjoyed this you are going to write more correct?

love the story

cant wait for the next chap

Let's just hope he doesn't wake up the same way as he did in the movie.

The story has potential. Why is she in that city with no place to stay? One suggestion: please check your spelling.

Hello, I hope you enjoy my story. More to come!