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Franz3007
2009-01-15 . chapter 12
Another great fanfic, good job!
I read everything you read. Can't wait for the next story!
petiyaka
2008-12-28 . chapter 12
GReat fic! The asteroides are well used in your fics. I love it!
Alastor Vega
2008-12-27 . chapter 12
A father's worst nightmare, but instead of the boyfriend doing something inappropriate its the daughter. And I hope that Jun and Ves make it through.
deep serenity
2008-12-27 . chapter 12
Sorry I havent reviewed before now, this was a good story! I personally like Ves (more then USA, lol, but you know how i feel about her...which goes to show how wonderful your writing is that I would reas a USA story)I hope you can progress her story...i always feel bad for her

As for Helios moving in...we'll it's interesting considering what happened in the last story, I wouldn't want my daughters boyfriend moving in after they'd had sex...but hey I guess since USA was to immature to focus with out him what could you do.

Again you've done a wonderful job of emotions and themes. Keep up the great work you always give us. Thank you!
Serandi82
2008-12-27 . chapter 12
You've fastly become one of my favorite writers here! I love reading your stories because you have a way of pulling someone into the story. You really know how to captivate an audience, and I really do hope you continue writing.
James Birdsong
2008-12-21 . chapter 11
Oh wow however you wanna say it
Alastor Vega
2008-12-20 . chapter 11
Evil. EVIL.
petiyaka
2008-12-20 . chapter 11
the spirit is turning really bad. GReat job! It's amazing!
Alastor Vega
2008-12-13 . chapter 10
Wow. Talking about sins of the past would pass into the future. Poor Jun.
Hidden Firecracker
2008-12-06 . chapter 9
I really liked Hotaru this chapter. Her words really affected the princess - they need a leader whether it is Sailor Moon or the Princess. It shows that a good leader leads from the heart and soul. I also thought Pallas' doll time was funny and much needed comic relief.
James Birdsong
2008-12-06 . chapter 9
Um. Neat tho.
Alastor Vega
2008-12-06 . chapter 9
I guess Palla was the twisted sister of the group.
Alastor Vega
2008-11-29 . chapter 8
One of these days, Ves' outburst going to get her into real trouble.
moonangel0905
2008-11-22 . chapter 7
I like the direction you are taking in this story. Is this supernatural force going to corrupt the princess and hotaru since they both were possessed at one point in time? Or is it a Dead Moon Circus spirit lingering still? Update soon.
James Birdsong
2008-11-22 . chapter 7
Greatarific
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