That's it. It's official. I've fallen madly in love with this story. And I will definately follow it to the end. It's such a masterpiece; the only flaw I can find is that there are not enough reviews :) and you definately deserve more.

Definately a great story. Very, very well written. It feels like reading an actual book. I'd really like to read more, please update more often. While reading, hours pass, without me noticing.

Yay~ you updated and we got out lemon ^^ imma in love with this story, you must update more often, I love this story

Oi, I just love this series. I love BxL, and you capture it wonderfully, please write more! Oh, how I anticipated part eight. <3

Oh... my god... my cheeks are so red right now! Such a long nice, completely hot steaming chapter! GOD did YOU make it up for not updating in a while!
I absolutely love this. It's kind of sad that they're not that experienced that they could make things less painful, but oh my kira, what a hot chapter this was!
You need to update more frequently, because seriously'too little BBxL stories that nail their characters are out here and it's so incredibly sexy.
Love it, love it, love it to death!!

That was everything I had hoped for... And more... And it was realistic and just amazing. Great job!

You know, I've been picturing the sex ever since Beyond touched L's hair in the earlier chapters, and this pretty much sums it up. It's perfect.

Also, I dig the whole submission and possession thing. Very hot.

And L stopped being a tease! With the price of being hurt...

HOLY CRAP! You don't know how much I've been anticipating this chapter! I even forced no one to talk to me until I finished it.

I await the next chapter eagerly...

So there's more after this chapter? Did I read the author note correctly? I hope so...need more of your version of Beyond.

What good things can I say about this that I haven't already? Nothing. I still love your storytelling and characterization of all the characters, even A who didn't get more that a mention in the book.


In other news that you and no one else cares about: OMG, out of seven stories I've been waiting on FOREVER to update, you updated first. God, I hope that means A World for Fools is next, but I'll take any one of them at this point.

i ever looked forward the next chapture and now it´s done :) i´m so happy cause that´s such a great story :D i really hope the next update is a bit earlyer hehe ;D

and yay it would be awesome to read Beyond masturbating xD
i hope the lationship between L and B goes further oO i´m a pervert i know xD

i worship you for this chapture (nya for the whole story) it´s adorable and makes my heart beat faster O:O ;)

This story is so sick, and amazing, and interesting.
I could go on for longer :):)
I love B but he scares the crap put of me.
'It would have to do... for now'
No!! You can't leave it there!!
Its ace that your chapters are really long,
But pleasse update soon XD

Why, yes, I would have liked to read about B masterbating...creepilly masterbating and talking like L...

OH BALLS, I would so love to see that. Either chapter edit or make up for it! (please?)

This story is fantastic. It is seriously THE best story I have read in a long, long time. I look forward to the next update.

Now I will spread the gosple of Vitamin B.

This is one great story! Its one of my favorites, thank you so much for writing it. I love the way it is written. You really write a lot ^^

Uwah! I was totally waiting for an update, and when I saw the 'New Chapter' thing in my email, I glomped my computer..! :3 This chapter was absolutely aawesome, and it has made my day~! :D

~Jer-chan

Oh my god you updated it! o__o

I flipping LOVE you!

I am so glad you updated this fic. I really love it to pieces so very much. x3

At any rate, this chapter was nice. Lots and lots to read and I enjoyed every bit. It was as well written as the previous chapters and I seemed to immediately pick back up and remember what was going on(Even though I've not read the past chapters in forever and did indeed forget some parts in the fic. ).

None the less, you seem to make me still continue to understand it perfectly without me even having to be summarized or have to re-read chapters so that is very good!

Now for the story.

I still love how you are portraying A(Me being an A-fantard and all so I always get nit-pickity when it comes to A. ). Your A is a very good example of how he was dealing with Wammy's at Wammy's House. Breaking and falling to piece's. His relationship towards B in this fic is rather interesting.

Usually I see A being either close friend's or in some kind of romantic relationship when him and B are in Wammy's House so seeing their relationship towards eachother like this is very appealing and it feel's fresh and new.


I also enjoyed the part with the mouse. The way you had described B killing it was perfect. I actually used to have a friend who squashed a mouse like that and I could completely see it when you wrote it. Of course, I do feel sorry for the poor little thing. However the way you wrote it felt like I could just imagine it immediately and see it in my head.


Now the relationship between L and BB is indeed starting to heat up. I am liking how their relationship is slowly progressing. It's nice to read how they are interacting with one another and are slowly becoming closer and closer with one another and such. I can tell that their relationship is going to build quite a lot more by the looks of things.


Ah and one more thing, that person that had interrupted L and BB. The one that had asked “Someone said they heard a commotion, sir is everything alright?”
I am extremely curious as to find out exactly who that was.
However my suspicions keep telling me that it is possibly A. I just could see it I suppose. Him sneaking out and over-hearing the two then interrupting them like that or something along those lines. But this is just a kind of prediction/guess-timation.

Anyways, thank you so much for posting a new chapter! I can not wait to read more!

I had to bit my tongue to keep me from laughing out loud XD
Although I can't wipe that grin off my face XD
OMG!! I just SO love this story!
Poor mouse though! I kind of expected it but still...!
I loved the BBxL moment XD And oh my God XD I LOVED the ending XD I SOO imagine him to do that XD
I so wonder what will happen next! It's killing me, it's such an awesome story!!

This is truly turning out to be an amazing piece of fiction. I'm very glad that you decided to continue.

First of all, I absolutely loved the marked progression for L's increased awareness (overlook...avoid...allow...accept...encourage). It is a really powerful way to show his descent and submission to Beyond.

Second, I seriously commend your attention to detail. The little things that your characters do that make them more human (like L's handing touching the window, or where exactly the water drips), and the intricate observations you make in your writing are remarkable. Detail that great is something to be proud of. Most people don't notice things the way you do, let alone write about it in such a beautiful manner--it's a pleasure to read.

I love how you're developing L, by the way. The line about him not being a child was a particularly interesting one.

Also, B's spiral into insanity (as well as A's) is becoming increasingly noticeable (or perhaps it's just a revealed awareness of what was already there). Your pacing is incredible. Things like the destroyed mouse, the controlling way in which he talks to L, or the bullying... You've made them slowly but surely become more serious offenses. Even Quillish and the orphanage are becoming involved because of the severity.

There are a few things that could use refining in your spelling and grammar; I've noticed a few mistakes here and there, and there are a bit of run-on sentences. I'm sure if you got a beta these things would be fixed up in no time (I would love the job, if you'd want one).

Your scenes involving intimacy are very realistic and addictive. As such, I would /love/ to read the masturbation scene if you'd care to put it in...