the best love scene between L and B ever!

more pleez?!

squee!

That's it. It's official. I've fallen madly in love with this story. And I will definately follow it to the end. It's such a masterpiece; the only flaw I can find is that there are not enough reviews :) and you definately deserve more.

Definately a great story. Very, very well written. It feels like reading an actual book. I'd really like to read more, please update more often. While reading, hours pass, without me noticing.

Yay~ you updated and we got out lemon ^^ imma in love with this story, you must update more often, I love this story

Oi, I just love this series. I love BxL, and you capture it wonderfully, please write more! Oh, how I anticipated part eight. <3

Oh... my god... my cheeks are so red right now! Such a long nice, completely hot steaming chapter! GOD did YOU make it up for not updating in a while!
I absolutely love this. It's kind of sad that they're not that experienced that they could make things less painful, but oh my kira, what a hot chapter this was!
You need to update more frequently, because seriously'too little BBxL stories that nail their characters are out here and it's so incredibly sexy.
Love it, love it, love it to death!!

That was everything I had hoped for... And more... And it was realistic and just amazing. Great job!

You know, I've been picturing the sex ever since Beyond touched L's hair in the earlier chapters, and this pretty much sums it up. It's perfect.

Also, I dig the whole submission and possession thing. Very hot.

And L stopped being a tease! With the price of being hurt...

HOLY CRAP! You don't know how much I've been anticipating this chapter! I even forced no one to talk to me until I finished it.

I await the next chapter eagerly...

So there's more after this chapter? Did I read the author note correctly? I hope so...need more of your version of Beyond.

What good things can I say about this that I haven't already? Nothing. I still love your storytelling and characterization of all the characters, even A who didn't get more that a mention in the book.


In other news that you and no one else cares about: OMG, out of seven stories I've been waiting on FOREVER to update, you updated first. God, I hope that means A World for Fools is next, but I'll take any one of them at this point.

i ever looked forward the next chapture and now it´s done :) i´m so happy cause that´s such a great story :D i really hope the next update is a bit earlyer hehe ;D

and yay it would be awesome to read Beyond masturbating xD
i hope the lationship between L and B goes further oO i´m a pervert i know xD

i worship you for this chapture (nya for the whole story) it´s adorable and makes my heart beat faster O:O ;)

This story is so sick, and amazing, and interesting.
I could go on for longer :):)
I love B but he scares the crap put of me.
'It would have to do... for now'
No!! You can't leave it there!!
Its ace that your chapters are really long,
But pleasse update soon XD

Why, yes, I would have liked to read about B masterbating...creepilly masterbating and talking like L...

OH BALLS, I would so love to see that. Either chapter edit or make up for it! (please?)

This story is fantastic. It is seriously THE best story I have read in a long, long time. I look forward to the next update.

Now I will spread the gosple of Vitamin B.

This is one great story! Its one of my favorites, thank you so much for writing it. I love the way it is written. You really write a lot ^^

Uwah! I was totally waiting for an update, and when I saw the 'New Chapter' thing in my email, I glomped my computer..! :3 This chapter was absolutely aawesome, and it has made my day~! :D

~Jer-chan