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how could i not have seen this? man, you updated TWO DAYS AGO, starclan forbid... -whacks self on head-

well, just for information's sake, i thought you'd like to know that i've sobered up a little (yep!! that means no more irritating bouncy little pieces of review for your poor tired author head to deal with) and that i'm glad you're back! you had NO IDEA how frightened i was, my friend told me that'd you'd been run over by a roller coaster when you fell out of it onto the track. apparently, you had been thinking about what to write next.

i checked the newspaper, your account, my email and the obituaries daily (yes, DAILY) but just my luck the day your story came out had to clash with my grandmother's wake. i miss her... so your story came as a great comfort to me. to read that familiar style again and to figure out the many mysteries that you set for us readers is fun! now, i haven't forgotten the ritual for celebrating the release of your lovely new piece of work, so see ya soon, hopefully in yet another chapter of YDCF!!

~Autumn~

PS is the girl who wrote the letter Larxene?

... I think that our mystery girl is... Larxene?

(You should know by now that I am TERRIBLE when it comes to these things. I one of those people who do NOT like open-ended endings and, goddamit, why can't they just TELL me if the Inspector was really from the future and was actually Jesus in disguise?!)

...Anyways, back to the (TOTALLY FAB, btw) story!

I thought Roxas was abs-- (Huh, do ya know how many times I've been interrupted, trying to write this?)

Anyways.

I thought Roxas was absolutely the best bro in the world. He came across as so sweet and caring, how I wish my brother was like that. Seriously thought those letters that Naminé had been sifting through seemed awfully cold hearted. Like 'She Who Shall Not Be Named In Case I Got It Wrong' did not actually care and was just tormenting her. And I think we both know that Nami doesn't deserve that pain (and I think Roxas would agree if, oh how I wish it were true, he were real). I thought was rather dramtic with the whole paper ripping schabang. It seemed kinda final, like the stages of mourning after breaking up with the boyfriend (or, in this case, girlfriend). Y'know, the looking through old pictures phase followed by the burning his/her stolen possesions and, whoopsie, scratching their new car. My bad. I loved how Roxas wrote to her, while sitting with her, in such a caring and loving way, in a way she would understand, through words written on paper. And, just to finish off, I would just like to say that I was actually pretty struck by the last line. Naminé seems so sweet and innocent. I like how she said 'thank you' twice. It really seemed to convey how grateful she was for his presence. Lord, I know I would be thankful to have Roxas sitting next to me. (Ehehe). And, I know I said that was the last thing, but I lied. I also loved how we got to see the tender side of Roxas, the one he ever barely shows (normally to Sora or Nami, not even Axel, though we know those two bop like bunnies). So, there, said what I had to and now am out of breath (not really, but, y'know what I mean!). Hope to see more from ya soon, am slightly upset that my funeral preparations were in vain but, never mind.

Let's make a deal. How's about you keep writing and I'LL do the difficult job of reading what you write. (Golly, such a hard life! :B)

Tasha x

WELCOME BACK! You were missed. There's a dearth of gobstoppin' KH fanfics when you're not here. ):

...So,
WHY DIDN'T YOU POST THIS SOONER!?! We're all glad that you haven't fallen off the edge of the planet, but it's so good! D8 I was crying. Perhaps I'm just a fluffy ball of emo-tion right now, but it was so beautiful!

The description didn't make sense at first, but by the end, I knew. But I should probably start from the beginning, yes?

Poor Namine! )= I really liked the opening bit - however curt a drabble has to be, the first few sentences illustrated something elegant in my mind. I love how you can do that! Your imagery is always spot on. The way you use your pen can be compared to an artist and his paintbrush. /And even in drabbles do you do this!/ You have such a lovely style of writing. Like I said, you made me cry. XD OVER A DRABBLE! This thing only has 565 words but I was sobbing like a child!

/Why/ was I sobbing? The interactions between Namine and Roxas were loving and gentle. I adore how you used the dregs of Namine's failed relationship and used them to build a tender moment between two siblings.

And I'm going to interupt what quite possibly could have been a fluent thought and say that I think LARXENE is the one to break up with Namine! ): Not only have I seen you use this couple before but there were several sentences in that note that just sounded so much like the melodramatic Larxene that we all know and love and/or hate.

"I wish you well, but not too well." - ily2 baby, geez. xP

"Don’t be upset over this, darling, because I really loved you—" - To me, that last line seemed rather insincere. I might be digging too deep, but the rest of it seems that despite what she says, Larxene's love has shifted to something else. Some of it sounds a little awkward, like she doesn't know how to break away, but it definitely is bitter. She's refering to a relationship as a "thing," and I thought that was pretty cruel. Poor Namine doesn't deserve to be treated like that! D=

I can't quite decide if this AU or not (Roxas's little note could go either way, as could the scenery) but it's so sweet! Again, I'll say that I love how you turned the break-up and Namine's sorrow into something joyous between the siblings. Roxas's anger over the note proved how much he cared for Namine. And when he wrote her a little note back, I couldn't help but smile. :)

What else are you hiding from us in that purple notebook of yours? >.>;
MY FINGERS ARE CROSSED! =]

Much love,
Leigh

NO! NO I DON'T KNOW!
or i have a faint idea. TELL ME!
oh, btw babe, isn't the cup supposed to be ON TOP of the coaster? i confused. or maybe she put it on top of the cup to keep it warm?

aw.

who was the other girl?