Wow...just, wow. Love it.

A little OoC but not bad. (the OoC is not criticism, just a statement, I assume that you had decided upon it)

That was a nice oneshot. Good original storyline and great characterization. Videl reacted how I think she would. I really enjoyed this. good job!

this is really a good story!

you can put the detail clearly,, i really like it,,

you're very talented!

it formed tears in my eyes,, it's really touching

YES PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL I REALLY LIKE THIS!

OMG! I LOVED THIS! THIS IS LIKE THE ULTIMATELY PERFECT FIC! too bad i'm a lil off my a few years...:D BUT I LOVE IT! i'm checking ur bio to see if there's MORE...please let there be more!

this was awesome_

I found a few things wrong

would Gohan have to go to a job to pay for the house? His Father built it not the government

wouldn't Bulma lend the Son's money?

would Goten go to school?

would Gohan get a cold he is a Saiyan

Aww... That's sweet, and very touching...

I really like this story. It is really well thought out and the emotions can be fealt strongly. It was an excelent story. I think that a sequel would be great. Please keep up the good work! See ya!

i luv it! i'm crying too!

aw! That was so sweet! ;_;

This is really cool!

wow, this story was really moving. I never actually thought of Videl as a gossiper before, it was like seeing someone in a new light! Im gonna read the sequal now, i hope it's as good as this one. I'll review that too k?

Yeah i think u should make a sequel for this .

I would lov to know what would happin afther this.

keep up the good work