I like this one, very well written and easy to follow. Great work with the characters :)

i really luv this story cantwait for next update


p.s
biggest hitsukarin fan
just luvs this pairing

OMG! GREAT STORY! A FEW MONTHS AGO I READ THIS STORY AND LOVE IT (but it was only 4 ch long) IT IS SO GOOD! I hope college is goin good for ya! I can only imagin it cuz i just graduated from middle school (High school here I come!) so ya and to prove that I love this story, im typing this review at 1:05 in the morning! well good much in college (and wish me luck in hs...summer school.

Still being drawn into the mysteries of the stories. I am a bit confused though--are the master and the apprentice good guys and the intruder/son the evil guy?

Thanks for a nice cliffhanger!

This feels like an alternative Diamond Dust Rebellion. Well written, no complaints.

oh wow... that was AMAZ-ZING!(pronounce the z twice or it doesn't work) i've read this story from the beginning, and i don't think there are very many mistakes. i like your writing style

*Glomps Lilli and kisses her*

YAY UPDATE! XD
and a kissing scene too! (welp a little more than just a kissing scene *wiggles eyebrows*)
Boy, i was really really anticipating your update, i love this fic. Glad you had time to write ;D
Tho i know how it feels when exams and such are near, my ones are one week down the road and i haven't done a damned thing about it (i'm gonna fail, totally...)

But this chapter's getting me very curious..."Who's that master guy?" and it seems you're gonna give toushiro a very bad time...well if he is the "young boy" you're talking about...lolz...but on the other hand "The young boy" sounds more like Mika's son...

anway can't wait until your next update!

YAY!
thats awesome = )
now hurry up and write the next one HAHA

and lol at 'annoying as bat shit'
xoxo

Well, it has been a long time, but hey, I totally understand the whole "being busy with school" thing. I'm experiencing something similar at the moment. Anyway, I really liked this chapter. The back story is totally sweet, and I like the hints to the past lives. It's kind of like your 40 nights series, but with a different twist. Anyway, good luck with school and with writing, and I really hope you update soon!

nice i like it alot
:D

And i was thinking about your fic last night and little worried that you'd forgotten about it, but woke up to see your update!
I was so happy cause i really love your fic!

Really lookg forward to your next update :D
Just really glad to see that you haven't abandoned this!

I hate college in that it sucks up all your time and kicks your butt if you're not careful, good luck with it!

And yay, flashback chapters, always nice. Stalker Hitsugaya makes me laugh.

I ran across your story today, and I am quite drawn in and intrigued by your arc. The correlation between the opening letter and this memory was nicely done.
Are the little extras at the bottom of chapters 1 thru 4 Mika's or are they the future of Yuuki?
Thank you for a good read. Good luck with University, and I look forward to the next chapter.

heyy! wow interesting plot you've got going. but i love it! its awesome. and i love the pairing! awesome i can't wait to read more!

oh, the ending keeps getting weirder scarier and freakier, so hurry up and get to the part where yu explain it, and yes yu shuld know your story has a very serious and scary atmosphere, i love to play...MAKE THEM PLAY!love the sstory sorry for being so late to mis it, but yu didnt even write more, oh please hurry i love it i want to see how it turns out, surely they wont run forever... WAT THEY WIL!

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